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Band 7+: The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.

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The image presents a bar chart with the vertical axis labeled "Thousands in further education" ranging from 0 to 1200 in increments of 200, detailing data for "Male" and "Female" across academic periods "1970/71", "1980/81", and "1990/91" for "Full-time education" and "Part-time education". For Male: in 1970/71, Part-time is 1000 and Full-time is approximately 100; in 1980/81, Part-time is approximately 850 and Full-time is approximately 140; in 1990/91, Part-time is approximately 900 and Full-time is approximately 220. For Female: in 1970/71, Part-time is approximately 720 and Full-time is approximately 60; in 1980/81, Part-time is approximately 810 and Full-time is approximately 200; in 1990/91, Part-time is approximately 1100 and Full-time is approximately 220.

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This bar chart displays the amount of males and females furthering their education full time and part time in the UK throughout different years.

Overall, for both genders, the number of part time students was always greater than the number of fulltime students, and the number of full-time learners increased over the years.

The total number of males in part time education decreased between 1970/71 and 1990/91 from just under 1000, 000 to approximately 900,000 while the total number of female part-time learners increased dramatically from around 700,000 learners in 1970/71 to just under 1200,000 learners in 1990/91, surpassing the number of men in part-time further education.

For full time learners, there were more men than women in 1970/71 which swiftly changed by 1980/81, where there was a surge in the number of female learners with around 200000 women while there were only approximately 100000 men. In 1990/91 the number of both male and female learners rose till they were equal at just over 200000 learners each.

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number: 8

learners: 8

1970/71: 3

1990/91: 3

female: 3

there: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and key trends for both full-time and part-time education across the given years. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., 'just under 1000, 000' should be 'approximately 1,000,000', and '1200,000' should be '1,100,000' or '1,200,000' depending on the exact figure). Additionally, the report omits specific data for male full-time education in 1980/81 and 1990/91, and the comparison between genders could be more precise. To improve, ensure all key figures are accurately reported and consider including more specific data points for each category and year.

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The report is well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is generally effective. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between the discussion of part-time and full-time learners. To improve, consider using clearer linking phrases between paragraphs and within sentences to enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with appropriate terms like 'furthering their education,' 'surpassing,' and 'surge.' However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'the amount of males and females' (should be 'number') and 'just under 1000, 000' (incorrect comma placement). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and natural collocations, and ensure numerical expressions are written correctly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, and generally maintains grammatical accuracy. However, there are a few errors and awkward phrasings, such as 'which swiftly changed by 1980/81' (should be 'which changed swiftly by 1980/81') and 'rose till they were equal' (should be 'rose until they were equal'). Additionally, some sentences are overly long and could be broken down for clarity. Proofreading to correct minor errors and improve sentence flow would enhance the grammatical range and accuracy.

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