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Band 6+: The chart below shows the numbers of three types of visitors to a museum between 1997 and 2012.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing museum visitors from 1997 to 2012: adult, under 15, and special exhibition visitors. In 1997, adult visitors were 300,100, under 15 were 120,000, and special exhibition were 28,000, totaling 448,100. In 2002, adults were 302,200, under 15 were 110,000, and special exhibition were 29,200, totaling 441,200. In 2007, adults were 400,500, under 15 were 87,000, and special exhibition were 37,700, totaling 525,200. In 2012, adults were 380,000, under 15 were 82,300, and special exhibition were 42,000, totaling 504,300.

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The bar graph illustrates the number of three types of visitors who visited a museum from 1997 to 2012.

Overall, the highest number of adult visitors visited the museum, whereas the fewest visitors were special exhibition visitors. The largest number of visitors was found in 2007, followed by 2012, which shared the second-highest figure compared to 19987 and 2002.

The majority of visitors were found in 2012 where most of them were adult visitors almos 380000 in number. 82300 and 42000 people were visitors under the age of 15 and special exhibition visitors in the same year. In 2007, 400500 adult visitors visited the museum which was the highest that year followed by 8700 visitors under the age of 15 and 37700 were special exhibition visitors.

The visitor numbers were seen in 1997 and 2002 saw a decline. In 1997, total visitors were 448100 which included 300100 adult visitors, 120000 visitors under the age of 15 and 28000 were special exhibition visitors. A nearly similar figure was seen in 2002 where total visitors were 441000. Among them 302200 were adult visitors, 110000 were visitors under the age of 15 and 29200 were special exhibition visitors.

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visitors: 19

adult: 5

special: 5

exhibition: 5

number: 4

under: 4

visited: 3

museum: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the chart, including the overall trend and comparisons between visitor types and years. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as the typo '19987' and the incorrect figure '8700' for under-15 visitors in 2007 (should be 87,000). The report could be improved by providing a clearer summary of the overall trends, such as the increase in adult and special exhibition visitors over the period, and the decline in under-15 visitors. Additionally, ensure all data points are accurately reported and avoid minor numerical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for different time periods. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'The visitor numbers were seen in 1997 and 2002 saw a decline' is confusing). The paragraphing is logical but could be improved by more effective use of cohesive devices to link ideas and comparisons smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'the highest number', 'the fewest visitors'). However, there are instances of imprecise word choice and repetition (e.g., 'visitors' is used frequently, and 'almost' is misspelled as 'almos'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'approximately', 'roughly', 'accounted for', 'comprised'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors that affect clarity. For example, 'almos' should be 'almost', '19987' should be '1997', and '8700' should be '87,000'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure (e.g., 'The visitor numbers were seen in 1997 and 2002 saw a decline' is grammatically incorrect). To improve, proofread carefully and practice using a variety of complex sentences with accurate punctuation.

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