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Band 5+: The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

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The image presents a bar chart portraying the percentage of Malaysian men and women who exercise regularly segmented into 6 age groups. Males age 15-24 exercise 45%, females 40%; 25-34 male 48%, female 44%; 35-44 male 53%, female 45%; 45-54 male 57%, female 50%; 55-64 male 50%, female 45%; 65 and over male 40%, female 30%.

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Bar chart provides information reagarding how many people according to gender engaged in exercising in Malaysia.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of women almost maintained by far the highest level regardless of age, whereas that of men was in relatively lower except for people aged 14-25.

Focusing on age profile which had a immense tendency for exercising, females in 25-64 age bracket made up all-time large number around 50% in terms of exercising, while the proportion of reverse gender witnessed relatively lower indexes, just under 45%, apart from the one with roughly 40% which was 35-44 aged people.

Looking at figures for seniors, the rate of exercising was identical standing at just over 45%. Meanwhile, women aged 15-24 followed a healthy lifestyle via exercising at the same point with old aged ones that was lower than men’s proportion within this age group which was much more higher with 55%.

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The report provides a general overview of the data presented in the bar chart, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the specific percentages of men and women who exercise regularly across different age groups. The report should focus more on accurately presenting the data provided in the description.

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The report has some coherence and cohesion issues as there are instances of unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing that affect the overall flow of the report. Additionally, the paragraphing could be improved for better organization of ideas.

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The report lacks precision in vocabulary use and could benefit from more sophisticated language to describe the data effectively.

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While there is an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, there are grammatical errors throughout the report that impact clarity. Punctuation errors and awkward phrasing also affect the overall accuracy of the language used.

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Band 5+: The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

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