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Band 4+: The chart below shows the reason for travel and the main issue for traveling public in the US in 2009.

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The image contains two charts. The first chart shows reasons for travel and is represented in the form of a bar graph with five categories. "To and from work" has the highest percentage at 49%, followed by "Personal reasons" at 19%, "Shopping" at 16%, "Social / recreation" at 10%, and "Visit friends / relatives" at 6%. The second chart presents the main issues for the traveling public in a pie chart with six categories. "Price of travel" comprises the largest portion at 36%, "Safety concerns" at 19%, "Aggressive drivers" at 17%, "Highway congestion" at 14%, "Access to public transport" at 8%, and "Space for pedestrians" at 6%. All data is from the US in 2009.

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The pie chart and bar chart illustrate causes for commuting and the main problems of the public travelling in the us in 2009.

Considering from an overall perspective,the majority of commuters travel for their work.However,less number of traveller travel due to visit their friend home and reletive home.Addtionally,the main reason of public transportations was higher cost of travelling.Moreover,another reason was the space for pedestrains affected less on public transportation.

To begin with,only 6% commuters preffred travel for their friends and reletives,wheras more than 4% traveller who opted travelling due to social and recreation.In addition to that,16 % of people selected travelling due to to shopping.Moreover,due to personal reasons and for work 19% and 49% of people who chos travel respectively.

Futhermore,the major issue was noticed due to price of travel where it accounted for 36% of overall reasons.Apart from this,19% issue was exeprinced of safety concers.Additionally,aggressive drivers and highway congestion was contributed 17% and 14% respectively as main issues.In addtion to that,the another issue such as accessbility of public transport accountned for 8% and space for pedestrains was represented only 6% ,as main issue.

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing both charts and highlighting key trends. It covers the main data points and provides an overall summary. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as misinterpreting the 'Social/recreation' percentage (stated as 'more than 4%' instead of 10%) and some spelling/grammatical errors that slightly affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and proofread for language errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Considering from an overall perspective' and 'To begin with' are used, but transitions between ideas are often abrupt). Paragraphing is present but not consistently managed, and the reader may need to re-read sentences to follow the message. To improve, focus on creating clearer topic sentences and using a wider range of linking words accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'causes for commuting' instead of 'reasons for travel'), but there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'preffred', 'reletive', 'Addtionally', 'exeprinced', 'accessbility', 'pedestrains') and misuse of words (e.g., 'traveller' instead of 'travelers', 'accountned' instead of 'accounted'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of 'travel' and 'issue'. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'accounted for', 'comprised', 'constituted') and ensure correct spelling and word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'aggressive drivers and highway congestion was contributed'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'preffred', 'chos'), missing articles (e.g., 'the main reason of public transportations'), and punctuation errors (e.g., missing commas after introductory phrases). The range of sentence structures is limited, with many simple sentences and some fragments. To improve, practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals) and review basic grammar rules for tense, agreement, and articles. Proofreading for punctuation and spelling is also essential.

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