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Band 5+: The chart below shows what athropology graduates did after their undergraduate course. The table shows the salaries of anthorpologists salaries after 5 years of work

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The image illustrates the distribution and subsequent salaries of Anthropology graduates from one university. Destination of graduates: 52% full-time work, 15% full-time + postgrad study, 12% part-time work, 8% part-time work + postgrad study, 8% unemployed, 5% not known. Salaries after 5 years: $25,000-$49,999: freelance consultants 5%, government sector 5%, private companies 10%; $50,000-$74,999: freelance consultants 15%, government sector 15%, private companies 35%; $75,000-$99,999: freelance consultants 45%, government sector 30%, private companies 25%; $100,000+: freelance consultants 35%, government sector 40%, private companies 30%.

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The pie chart and table illustrates the rate of anthropology graduates’ destinations in what did they engage and the income of antrhorpoligists after 5 years period of work.

Overall, half of graduated anthropologists engaged in full time work while minority of them used to engage in part-time work and postgrad study. However the bulk of graduates who used to employ freelance conslutions and government sector earned considerably more money while those who worked in private companies got significantly lower salary.

The rate of students in anthropology university who engaged in full-time work was 52% while the figure for part time work accounted for 15%. The 12 percent of students were in unemployed which was higher by 7 percent than those who decided to mix part-time work and postgrad study. The percantage of students chose full time postgrad study and those who chose not known aspects accounted for 8%.

Regarding to the rate of graduates who earned from 25,000 to 49,999 dollars composed 5% of freelance consultants and 5% of government sector workers which was lower by 5% than the figure for private companies. 35% of private companies workers earned by 50,000 to 74,000 dollars while the figure for other staffs were same and composed 15%. 40 percent of freelance consultants and 30 percent of government sector employments and 25 percent of private companies workers got salary between 75,000 and 99,999 dollars. The half of all government workers used to get highest salary while only 30% of companies workers and 40% of freelance consultants got income from 100,000 and more in dollars

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The report addresses the main features of the chart and table, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the percentages for part-time work and postgrad study are misstated, and the data for the $50,000-$74,999 salary range is incorrectly described. Additionally, the report could be more clearly organized, with a more logical flow between the pie chart and table. To improve, ensure all data is accurately reported and avoid vague phrases like 'other staffs.' Also, use more precise language to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'the figure for part time work accounted for 15%' is ambiguous, and the transition between the pie chart and table data could be smoother. The paragraphing is adequate but could be improved by more logical grouping of information. To enhance coherence, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect (e.g., one for destinations, one for salaries).

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'engaged in', 'composed', 'accounted for'), but there are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'antrhorpoligists', 'conslutions', 'percantage') and awkward word choices (e.g., 'the rate of graduates' instead of 'the proportion', 'staffs' instead of 'employees'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are used incorrectly (e.g., 'employed' instead of 'employed as'). To improve, focus on accurate spelling and use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'proportion', 'percentage', 'earned', 'received', and 'sector'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('chart and table illustrates' should be 'illustrate'), incorrect verb forms ('used to engage' should be 'engaged'), and missing articles ('the 12 percent of students' should be '12 percent of students'). There are also issues with punctuation and sentence structure, such as run-on sentences and incorrect use of commas. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors. Focus on using correct tenses and prepositions.

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