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Band 5+: The chart shows a range of goods and services bought last year by internet shoppers in three different countries, namely Australia, Canada and the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar chart detailing internet purchasing categories across three countries. Toys: Australia ~45%, Canada ~35%, UK ~45%; Food and drink: Australia ~5%, Canada ~10%, UK ~5%; Financial services: Australia ~10%, Canada ~30%, UK ~10%; DVDs/videos: Australia ~45%, Canada ~60%, UK ~40%; Music: Australia ~50%, Canada ~45%, UK ~45%; Computer equipment: Australia ~55%, Canada ~35%, UK ~50%; Books: Australia ~50%, Canada ~40%, UK ~75%.

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The bar chart represents the consumers online purchased of goods and services in a year in Australia, Canada and The United Kingdom.

Overall, the category of consumers purchasing item online that all countries spent the most was on music. While the lowest spending category of all three countries was for finnacial services. The expenses of The United Kingdom was higher than the other two countries.

In terms of music, The United Kingdom spend the most at around 60% more, followed by Australia, then Canada. On the other hand, the lowest expenditure category was financial services for all three countries. Australia and Canada spent less than 20% on these items. While The United Kingdom spent nearly 0% on this category.

Books was the third category of top online consimers expedition among the other categories, were around 40% for both Australia and Canada. The average spending for this category was around 45%.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

category: 5

australia: 4

canada: 4

united: 4

online: 3

services: 3

countries: 3

spent: 3

kingdom: 3

other: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to summarize the main features of the bar chart, but it contains inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is not entirely accurate, and some of the details provided are either incorrect or lack sufficient support from the data. The report also suffers from issues with organization and clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, providing a clear and concise overview, and organizing the information logically. Ensure that comparisons are relevant and supported by the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas could be clearer. The introduction is adequate, but the overview is somewhat general and lacks specific details. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are not always smooth, which affects the flow of the report. For instance, the shift from the overall trends to specific categories could be more clearly signposted. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There is some repetition of words and phrases, such as 'spent' and 'category,' which could be replaced with synonyms to enhance lexical variety. The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more accurately and effectively. For example, instead of 'spent the most,' consider using phrases like 'had the highest expenditure' or 'allocated the largest proportion of their budget.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('consumers online purchased'), incorrect article usage ('the consumers online purchased', 'finnacial services'), and awkward phrasing ('expenses of The United Kingdom was higher'). Sentence structure is also somewhat simple and repetitive. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report and focus on using a wider range of sentence structures. Pay attention to verb tenses, articles, and subject-verb agreement.

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