Bar Chart

Band 4+: The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Bar Chart

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Image for topic: The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Bar Chart

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Holiday leisure activities" showing the average number of hours per day spent by tourists in Greece in August 2019. For Chinese tourists, the hours were: At the beach, 3; Reading books, 8; Visiting places, 1. For American tourists: At the beach, 4; Reading books, 5; Visiting places, 3. For Turkish tourists: At the beach, 5; Reading books, 4; Visiting places, 3. For Brazilian tourists: At the beach, 6; Reading books, 4; Visiting places, 2.

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The bar graph illustrates the hours spent on three different activities each day by people of four different countries while free time on their holiday in Greece in August 2019.

Icluding all activities, reading books holds the most of time spent by touristers. Although most of them also spent lot of time at the beach and less time spent as compared with these both activities is by visiting places.

Most of chinese people choose to spend their leasure time while on holidaying in reading books and it hold around hours a day and very less time to visit places just an hour in a day. All tourists are less intrested in visting the places as compared with reading books and spending time on the beach.

Brazilian touristers spent their most of time at the beach which is also highest for this activity comparing people from other countries which is exactly opposite for people of China.

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spent: 5

people: 4

activities: 3

their: 3

reading: 3

books: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main activities and making some comparisons, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, it does not provide specific data for American and Turkish tourists, and the statement that 'reading books holds the most of time spent by tourists' is not accurate overall since Brazilian tourists spend more time at the beach. Additionally, there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'Icluding', 'touristers', 'leasure', 'intrested', 'visting') that detract from clarity. To improve, ensure all key data points are included, make accurate comparisons across all nationalities, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure but lacks clear paragraphing and logical progression. The introduction is present, but the body paragraphs are not well-organized, and the flow of ideas is often disrupted by unclear references and abrupt transitions. Cohesive devices are used sparingly and sometimes inaccurately, making the message difficult to follow. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph, group related information logically, and employ a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices and spelling errors (e.g., 'Icluding', 'touristers', 'leasure', 'intrested', 'visting'). There is an attempt to use some descriptive language, but it is not always accurate or natural. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary related to data description and comparison, and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Use precise terms like 'approximately', 'whereas', 'in contrast', and 'the highest proportion'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly impede understanding. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, verb tense, articles, and sentence structure. For example, 'Icluding all activities' is a fragment, and 'it hold around hours a day' is missing a number and has incorrect verb form. To improve, focus on writing complete sentences, using correct verb forms, and proofreading for common errors. Practice using a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, to demonstrate greater grammatical control.

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