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The image shows graphical data regarding the distribution of the world's water and the use of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada. The first pie chart represents all water, with fresh water at 3% and salt water at 97%. The second pie chart represents fresh water, with ice & glaciers at 79%, ground water at 20%, and surface water at 1%. The bar graph shows the use of water in each of the three countries, with the highest percentage for agriculture in Egypt at 80%, domestic use in Saudi Arabia at 70%, and industry in Canada at 80%.

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The figures illustrate water distribution of the world including all water information scoping to fresh water and the use of water in three countries thought the three domain of usage involving agriculture, domestic usage and industry.

Overall, it is clear that salt water has more proportion than fresh water which has ice and glaciers in the largest ratio. In addition, the use of water in China’s agriculture and India’s agriculture is the most percentages, and water is used the hugest amount for industry in UAE.

it can be seen that the distribution of water in the world have fresh water less than salt water for 5% and 95%, respectively. Moreover, the fresh water is consisted 75% ice and glaciers which is the most part, and ground water has more portion than surface water for 23% and 2%, respectively.

The figure inform the use of water data and it is clear that UAE is the most usage in the industry as 80%. On the contrary, the water is used for agriculture in the most percentage in China and India as 77% and 75% respectively.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. It misidentifies the countries (e.g., mentions China, India, and UAE instead of Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada) and provides incorrect data (e.g., fresh water 5% instead of 3%, ground water 23% instead of 20%, surface water 2% instead of 1%). The overall structure is present, but the key details are inaccurate, which detracts from task achievement. To improve, ensure accurate representation of the data and correct identification of the countries and their respective water usage patterns.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and logical progression of ideas. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the information is presented in a confusing manner. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often inaccurate, making it difficult to follow the message. To improve, focus on creating a clear overview paragraph that summarizes the main trends, then organize the body paragraphs logically (e.g., one for water distribution, one for water use). Use a range of linking words and phrases appropriately to connect ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive. There are several instances of inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'scoping to', 'thought the three domain', 'hugest amount') that affect clarity. The report does not demonstrate a wide range of vocabulary or sophisticated control of lexical features. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing data (e.g., 'proportion', 'percentage', 'consumption', 'sector') and practice using synonyms to avoid repetition. Ensure that word choices are accurate and natural in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues ('distribution... have'), incorrect verb forms ('is consisted'), and problems with articles and prepositions. Sentence structures are often incomplete or awkward, and punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, review basic grammar rules, particularly subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and the use of articles. Practice writing a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound, complex) and ensure each sentence is grammatically complete and correctly punctuated.

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