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Band 8+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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The image contains two charts depicting Japanese tourists traveling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and Australia's percentage share of the market. The bar chart shows a steady increase from 5 million in 1985 to 15 million in 1995, with a peak at 11 million in 1990. The line graph indicates Australia's share rose from 2% in 1985 to 6% in 1995, with fluctuations between 4-5% in between.

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The charts compare the number of Japanese citizens who travelled overseas for holidays between 1985 and 1995, and the proportion of Australia’s share in the Japanese tourist market.

Overall, the total number of Japanese travellers increased dramatically over the decade, while Australia’s share of this market showed some fluctuations but ended with a slight decline after reaching its peak in 1993.

In 1985, about 5 million Japanese people travelled abroad. This figure more than doubled to approximately 11 million by 1990. In the following year (1991), there was a small dip, but numbers quickly rose again, reaching around 15 million by 1995.

As for Australia’s share, it began at 2% in 1985 and increased steadily to 5% by 1988. Although there was a minor fall to around 4-4.5% in 1989, the proportion grew gradually to just over 6% in 1993, before slightly decreasing to 6% in the final year..

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The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the information presented in both charts. The overview is clear, and the body paragraphs provide relevant details with appropriate data. There is a good use of language to describe trends and changes over time. To improve, ensure that all significant fluctuations and data points are mentioned, and consider using more precise language when describing quantities and proportions. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is very well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, and the paragraphing is effective. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are smooth, contributing to a cohesive and coherent text.

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The report exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are accurate throughout, contributing to the overall quality and readability of the report.

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Band 8+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report.

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