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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents four pie charts titled "Male woker in country A", "Female woker in country A", "Male woker in country B", and "Female woker in country B", detailing the distribution across Services, Agriculture, and Industry. For "Male woker in country A", Services accounts for 56%, Agriculture accounts for 29%, and Industry accounts for 15%. For "Female woker in country A", Services is 49%, Agriculture is 43%, and Industry is 8%. For "Male woker in country B", Services comprises 65%, Industry comprises 32%, and Agriculture comprises 3%. For "Female woker in country B", Industry constitutes 11%, Agriculture constitutes 1%, and Services is labeled as 49%.

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The pie charts provide information about the percentages of man and woman employers in two countries, such as country A and country B.

Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of male and female workers who worked in different sectors, such as industry, services, and agriculture. Services sector is the highest rate where male worker work at 65% in country B.

Looking at the data set in more detail, it is evident that the male worker work in industry sector stood at 15% in country A, whereas the female worker work at 8%. The percentages of male employer who work in agriculture sector at 29% and female worker work at 43% at the same sector. In services sector, man and women worker work at 56% and 49% in country A.

Turning to the data sets in more detail, it is clear that the proportion of man worker who work in industry sector at 32%, whereas lady worker work at 11% in country B. In services sector, male and female worker at 65% and 49% in country. Female worker work in agriculture sector at 1% and it is the lowest rate over the period shown.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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worker: 9

sector: 8

country: 7

female: 5

services: 4

industry: 3

agriculture: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main features of the pie charts, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, and key data points are provided, but the language is repetitive and contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurate data presentation, use a wider range of vocabulary, and ensure the report is well-structured with clear comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'in country' without specifying which country). The overview is somewhat vague and could be more comprehensive. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to group related information. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to link sentences and paragraphs more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with frequent repetition of 'worker', 'work', and 'sector'. There are also inaccuracies in word choice, such as 'man and woman employers' instead of 'male and female workers', and 'lady worker' instead of 'female workers'. The phrase 'the highest rate where male worker work' is awkward. To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms (e.g., 'employment', 'occupation', 'proportion', 'account for', 'represent') and avoid informal or incorrect expressions. Ensure subject-verb agreement and use appropriate collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'male worker work' should be 'male workers work'), incorrect use of articles (e.g., 'the male worker work in industry sector' should be 'the percentage of male workers in the industry sector'), and missing prepositions (e.g., 'at 29%' should be 'was 29%' or 'accounted for 29%'). The sentence 'The percentages of male employer who work in agriculture sector at 29%' is incomplete. To improve, use a wider range of sentence structures, ensure all sentences are complete, and proofread for basic grammar and punctuation errors.

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