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Band 6+: The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two bar graphs representing the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 in employment for four countries in two different years. The top graph shows the data for men: Belgium has 19% in 1970 and 79% in 2000; USA has 55% in 1970 and 73% in 2000; Japan has 74% in 1970 and 85% in 2000; Australia has 47% in 1970 and 76% in 2000. The bottom graph shows the data for women: Belgium has 7% in 1970 and 36% in 2000; USA has 36% in 1970 and 39% in 2000; Japan has 43% in 1970 and 40% in 2000; Australia has 16% in 1970 and 18% in 2000. The x-axis for both graphs ranges from 0 to 100%, and the y-axis lists the countries. The graphs also include a curved shape that links the 1970 and 2000 data points for each country, suggesting the trend over time.

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The graphs provided demonstrate the percentage of employed men and women aged 60-64 in Belgium, the USA, Japan, and Australia in 1970 and 2000.

Overall, the number of employed men aged 60-64 was higher compared to women in 1970 or 2000. At the same time, Japan had the highest number of workers, males and females, 86% and 74% for men and 43% and 40% for women in 2000 and 1970, respectively. Meanwhile, Belgium had the lowest percentage of employed men and women in 1970 at 19% and 7%, respectively, and in 2000, employed women had the lowest ratio of 8%.

Additionally, Belgium had a massive increase in worker men in 2000 of 79% compared to 19% in 1970, while the USA rose 18% in 2000. The number of employed men in Australia was 47% in 1970 and increased to 76% in 2000.

Moreover, the percentage of employed women in the USA and Australia was higher in 1970 than in the rest of the other countries, at 2% in 1970 for both countries compared to 2000.

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6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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employed: 6

women: 6

percentage: 3

belgium: 3

australia: 3

number: 3

compared: 3

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Task Response

The response provides a good overview of the main features and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the reporting of specific data points, and the comparison of the percentage of employed women in the USA and Australia in 1970 and 2000 is not clearly presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The report is generally well-organized and coherent, with a clear introduction and overview. The use of cohesive devices is mostly effective, but there are a few instances where the progression of ideas could be smoother.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, and the report demonstrates a relatively high level of lexical resource. However, there are some inaccuracies and imprecise word choices that affect the overall precision of expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The report exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures, and the majority of sentences are accurate. However, there are some errors in sentence structure and word form, which occasionally hinder communication.

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