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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two bar graphs representing the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 in employment for four countries in two different years. The top graph shows the data for men: Belgium has 19% in 1970 and 79% in 2000; USA has 55% in 1970 and 73% in 2000; Japan has 74% in 1970 and 85% in 2000; Australia has 47% in 1970 and 76% in 2000. The bottom graph shows the data for women: Belgium has 7% in 1970 and 36% in 2000; USA has 36% in 1970 and 39% in 2000; Japan has 43% in 1970 and 40% in 2000; Australia has 16% in 1970 and 18% in 2000. The x-axis for both graphs ranges from 0 to 100%, and the y-axis lists the countries. The graphs also include a curved shape that links the 1970 and 2000 data points for each country, suggesting the trend over time.

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The bar charts illustrate the proportion ot men and women aged 60-64 in employment in Australia, Japan, USA, Beigium between 1970 and 2000

Overall, the percentage of men show a significant decrease in 2000 in all countries while women displayed a slight increase. Despite that, number of men is greater than that of women in both years

The number of men reached to its highest point in Japan in 1970 by a percentage of 84% and declined in 2000 by a percentage of 76%. In addition to that number of men shows a massive fall in Beigium between the tow years with a proportion of 60%

On the other hand, women percentage rise in 2000 in both countries Australia and USA by 1% and 2% respectively. The proportion of women was the highest in Japan in 1970 by 43% which then starts receding in 2000 to reach the percentage of 40%

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The main features are identified, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparisons between the countries could be more detailed.

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The report is somewhat coherent, but there are issues with paragraphing and some abrupt transitions between ideas. More cohesive devices could be used to improve the overall flow.

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