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Band 4+: The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing what makes people most happy divided by age groups: people under 30 and people over 30. The chart for people under 30 has percentages as follows: Achievement at work 31%, Other factors 14%, Travelling 15%, Having a good appearance 18%, Doing hobbies 22%. The chart for people over 30 has percentages as follows: Achievement at work 32%, Being with family 14%, Financial security 20%, Other factors 10%, Doing hobbies 24%.

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The presented pie graphs delineate the survey results of happiness factors from two distinctive age brackets.

By merely looking at the graph achievement at work stands out at the highest portion which have the condictrary figure with other factors accounting for the lowest proportion in both groups age.

First and for most in under 30 each group achievement at work occupy the highest point at 31% which roughly double having a good appearance . Doing hobbies account for 22%. The difference between travelling and other factors is negligible.

Additionally, achievement at work still hold the first place in above 30 aged group with 32% which merely triple other factors . The different point between two groups is the financial security with 20% which 4% lower than doing hobbies. One factors that occupy the same proportion with other factors in under 30 aged group is being with family at 14%

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5.5

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons. However, more precise and detailed comparisons would enhance the response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report's organization and flow could be improved. The numerous grammatical errors disrupt the coherence and make the message difficult to follow at times.

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The vocabulary used is adequate, but a wider range of more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the overall quality. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Improved grammatical accuracy is essential.

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