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Band 4+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image contains two bar charts titled "Destination of UK graduates (excluding full-time work) 2008" and "Destination of UK postgraduates (excluding full-time work) 2008". The first chart shows Part-time work at 17,798, Voluntary work at 3,890, Further study at 26,655, and Unemployment at 16,255. The second chart shows Part-time work at 2,550, Voluntary work at 315, Further study at 2,725, and Unemployment at 1,625.

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The bar charts illustartes the data about the career options chosen by graduate and postgraduate students apart from the full time work soon after completing the college in UK during the year 2008.

Overall, majority of the students from both degree selected further study plan while half of the students remain unemployed. Few choose to work Voluntary.

UK graduates who took Further study as the next step after leaving the college are numberd at 29,665 the same field for the postgrade was at 2,725. Part time work was the secound most selected field that had 17,735 degree holder and 2,535 master degree holder. The Number of Students who choose Voluntary work was 10 times lesser then the students who choose Further Studies in both degrees. Furthermore, 16,235 students in Under Grade programme along with 1,625 students in Post Grade programme remains jobless.

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students: 7

degree: 3

further: 3

choose: 3

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Task Response

The response provides a good overview of the main features of the charts, highlighting the choices made by graduate and postgraduate students in the UK in 2008. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure and logical progression of ideas. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and linking of ideas.

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There is a good range of vocabulary used, but some inaccuracies and repetitions are present. More precise and varied word choices could enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings throughout the report. More attention to grammatical accuracy is needed.

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Band 4+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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