Band 4+: The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The report attempts to address the task by describing both temperature and rainfall trends, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The temperature peak is incorrectly stated as 22°C instead of 31°C, and the rainfall data is imprecise (e.g., 'around 100mm' and 'just over 320mm' do not match the given values). The report also lacks clear comparisons between the two variables and omits key details like the specific months of peaks. To improve, ensure accurate data extraction, include specific figures, and make direct comparisons (e.g., temperature peaks in May while rainfall peaks in July). Additionally, proofread for spelling errors (e.g., 'informathion', 'tempreatures'). The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report has a logical structure with an introduction and an overall summary, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'Between january and its a big differenice' is confusing and lacks clear connection to the previous sentence. The paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the second paragraph mixes temperature and rainfall details without clear separation. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Additionally, use cohesive devices such as 'in contrast', 'similarly', and 'while' more effectively to link ideas and data.

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some repetition (e.g., 'changes considerably' used twice) and imprecise word choices (e.g., 'informathion', 'tempreatures', 'apporoximately'). There is an attempt to use some appropriate terms like 'peak' and 'annual variation', but overall the lexical range is narrow. To improve, expand your vocabulary to include synonyms for 'change' (e.g., 'fluctuate', 'vary', 'differ') and more precise terms for describing trends (e.g., 'gradual increase', 'sharp rise', 'plateau'). Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms to enhance clarity.

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede understanding. Examples include missing articles ('the average temereture is around 20C'), incorrect verb forms ('it then rises steadily' should be 'it then rises steadily'), and run-on sentences ('At the beginning of the year the average temereture is around 20C . it then rises steadily, reaching a peak of apporoximately to about 22C by the end of the year .'). There is also inconsistent use of capital letters and spacing. To improve, focus on sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of articles. Proofread carefully to eliminate spelling errors and ensure proper punctuation. Using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses, would also enhance the report.