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Band 5+: The diagrams below show the changes of a park. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two diagrams labeled "Park in the past" and "Park now." The "Park in the past" diagram has a rectangular section with houses on top and a boating lake with three flower beds, surrounded by a footpath. In the center section, there are 12 tree symbols and a bench. The "Park now" diagram shows the same rectangular section with houses and a swimming pool, surrounded by a combined footpath and cycle path. There are four benches, a tennis court, a barbecue, and cafe symbols in the center section. Icon legends include cafe, bench, tennis court, flower bed, barbecue, and houses.

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the diagrams illustrate the changes of a park from the past to today

there are several changes at the left side of the park .the trees located in the centre were destroyed amount of the trees and replaced by benchs on the top and right side added a cafe . moreover , it built barbecue under a cafe , the new trees were planted at the bottom-left side .

the removal and modernization of some facilities have also been witnessed on the right part of of the park . on the top , the flower bed was demolished while the boating lake on the left side was destroyed and it replaced by swimming pool in the cetre . the park added tennis court in the bottom-left side . moreover , the cafe was removed from the right side to the left side

overall, reducing amount of trees and adding facilities in the left side helps places becomre more convinent while built facilities such as swimming pool and tennis court in the right part of the park helps local peopel can improve their health and quality of life

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main changes in the park. However, some key details are missing or inaccurate, and the comparison could be more precise and detailed.

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