How many score or band I can get from the following report in IELTS writing task 1 ?
The initial chart under describe how energy is used in a regular Australian household and the second illustration depicts the greenhouse gas released which culminate from this power used.
Overall, 70% of energy used in both heating and water heating where 60% of greenhouse gas emission was found in every Australian household. According to initial chart, 42% of energy is used for the purpose of heating while the rate of greenhouse gas emission was 15% . Moreover, 30% of energy was consumed for water heating where greenhouse gas stemmed 30% . However, 7 % of energy used for refrigeration, the result of this energy usage was 14% greenhouse gas emission in Australia individual building. As well as 15 % of energy applied other appliances while 28% greenhouse gas was released. And there was 4% of energy used for lighting purpose too, where 8% of greenhouse gas was released from this energy consumption. Moreover, there was a slight amount of energy was consumed for cooling at a rate 2% where 3% of greenhouse gas was emissed .
Nevertheless, most of energy was consumed for the purpose of heating in Australian household. Thus, most percentage of greenhouse gas was released as the comparison of both pie charts as well as a few amount of energy consumed with the purpose of cooling, lighting, refrigeration and other appliances while the result of this greenhouse gas was pretty slight in emissions rate.