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Band 4+: The first chart shows the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000. The second chart gives informstion about the birth and death rate in the same countries in the dame period Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays two charts about the population, birth rate, and death rate in England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. The first chart shows the population in millions; in 1700 it was under 10 million, in 1800 between 10-20 million, in 1900 between 40-50 million, and in 2000 over 50 million. The second chart shows the birth and death rate per 1000; in 1700, the birth rate was approximately 30, and the death rate was just over 30. In 1800, the birth rate was around 35, and the death rate was around 30. In 1900, the birth rate was just over 20, and the death rate was around 15. In 2000, the birth rate was just over 10, and the death rate was just under 10.

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The first bar chart illustrates the population of England and Wales between 1700 and 2000 in millions on y-axis and years on x-axis. The second bar chart shows the information about the number of birth and death rate in the same countries through same period.

Overall, the first bar charts shows the population of that countries. The second bar chart compare the birth and death rate of these countries. In the year 1700- 1800 the population is slowly going up to 15 millions. Following this, the overall population is greatly increased upto 40 millions. In the year 2000, the overall population is increased approximately upto 49 millions.

The second bar chart compares the birth and death rates between 1700 to 2000. In the years 1700-1800 the birth rates were highly increased upto 23 millions while the death rates in the same years were increased 17 millions approximately. In the 1900 the birth rates fell down to 15 millions, while the death rates decreases to 7 millions approximately.

In the year 2000 the birth rates slightly decreases more to 10 millions and the death rates also decreases upto 5 millions.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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millions: 9

rates: 7

birth: 6

death: 6

population: 5

chart: 4

increased: 4

years: 3

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countries: 3

decreases: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccuracies and lacks clear organization. The description of the data contains some numerical errors, and the writing could be more concise and focused on the main trends. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using more precise language.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is present but not effectively used to separate distinct ideas or time periods. To improve coherence, consider structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific time periods or trends, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices such as transition words and phrases to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, which limits the ability to express the information accurately and with nuance. There is a reliance on simple words and phrases, and a lack of more sophisticated vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to population statistics, rates, and trends. Use synonyms and varied expressions to avoid repetition and demonstrate a greater command of the English language. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors impede clarity and make it challenging to understand the intended meaning. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice using a variety of sentence types and verb tenses to express different ideas and relationships. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting the report.

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