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Band 5+: The flow-chart shows how a Christmas toy is produced using 3D printing on an FDM (fused deposition modelling) machine.

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The image presents a flow diagram of the 3D printing process using FDM (Fused Deposition Modeling) technology. It starts with a "3D model / CAD software" where "CAD" stands for "Computer-aided design," shows the star-shaped 3D CAD data on the monitor. The process continues with an "FDM machine - building by layers" which illustrates a supporting filament, build filament, extrusion head, liquifier, platform, extrusion nozzles, and a support structure. Two parallely arranged spools are displayed feeding the filaments to the machine. The next stage is "Removing support structure" where the support is detached from the star-shaped object, followed by "Painting, cleaning and polishing" depicted with spray, water, and cloth icons. Lastly, the object is placed in a "UV oven" labeled "Curing - 20 min" to presumably harden or set the printed material.

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The flow-chart illustrates the process of making christmas’s toys on a 3d printer.

Overall, the diagram has five main steps, beginning with a software and finishing with painting and cleaning the final product.

To iniciate producing the toy, it is necessary to design a 3d modelof the toy on a computer using a software calle CAD. After that being done, the FDM machine starts to build the layers for the product with colorfull liquifiers. This step requires a minimun temperature in order to heat the spools so it gain shape.

Continuing the process, after being printed, the support needs to be removed so the toy curing for 20 minutes in a especific type oven: UV. After the 20 minutes wait, the toy is almost done. The last step for it to become a christmas utility is to painting, cleaning and polishing. Furthermore, the final product will be done and very christmas’s like.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task by describing the main stages of the 3D printing process for a Christmas toy. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as mentioning 'colorfull liquifiers' and 'minimum temperature' which are not clearly indicated in the visual description. The sequence of steps is mostly correct, but the final stage is described as 'painting, cleaning and polishing' before the UV oven, whereas the visual description shows the UV oven as the last step. The report could be improved by more accurately reflecting the order and details of the process, and by avoiding speculative or irrelevant information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and a description of the main stages. However, the flow of information is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear sequencing. For example, the mention of 'curing' appears before the painting step, which does not match the logical order of the process. The use of cohesive devices is basic and occasionally inaccurate. To improve, focus on using a wider range of linking words and phrases to show the sequence of steps more clearly, and ensure that the order of stages is logically presented.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task but lacks precision and variety. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'iniciate', 'calle', 'colorfull', 'minimun', 'especific', 'christmas') and some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'gain shape', 'christmas utility'). The report would benefit from using more specific and accurate technical terms related to 3D printing and manufacturing. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to processes and materials, and proofread carefully to eliminate spelling mistakes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'to iniciate', 'so it gain'), missing articles (e.g., 'a software'), and incorrect plural forms (e.g., 'liquifiers', 'spools'). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex sentences. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures, such as relative clauses and passive voice, and review basic grammar rules for articles, verb tenses, and subject-verb agreement.

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