Band 5+: The flowchart illustrates the process of publishing a book. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The report addresses the task by describing the main stages of the book publishing process in order. It includes an overview and covers all nine steps. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'paper is written by using a writing machine' and 'printed papers binded together,' which may cause minor confusion. Additionally, the report lacks explicit comparisons or grouping of stages, which could enhance clarity. To improve, focus on using precise vocabulary and ensure grammatical accuracy, especially in verb forms and prepositions. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report is logically organized and follows the sequence of the process, but there are some lapses in cohesion. The use of linking words is basic and sometimes repetitive (e.g., 'Following this', 'In the stage that follows', 'When this stage is complete'). The final sentence is awkwardly phrased and lacks a clear connection. To improve, use a wider range of cohesive devices and ensure each sentence flows smoothly into the next. Also, consider using clear paragraphing to separate the overview from the detailed description.

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'commences', 'publishing houses', and 'distribution'. However, there are instances of awkward phrasing and repetition (e.g., 'via using a printer', 'the ready papers being printed'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'the process begins', 'submitted to', 'reviewed by', 'finalized', 'printed materials are bound', and 'distributed to retailers'. Avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'there are total of 9 steps' should be 'there are a total of 9 steps', 'before studying by editors' is incorrect (should be 'before being studied by editors'), 'contract is made' should be 'a contract is made', 'when they checked the book' should be 'after they have checked the book', 'designing of layout of book is made' is awkward, 'the ready papers being printed via using a printer' is ungrammatical, 'binded' should be 'bound', and 'it is then sent the distribution' should be 'it is then sent for distribution'. There are also missing commas and a missing period. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, article usage, and correct verb forms. Practice writing complex sentences with accurate grammar.