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Band 6+: The given chart shows the water level in reservoirs in cities in Australia in October 2009 and October 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart comparing water levels in reservoirs across six cities between 2009 and 2010: Perth, 2009: 40%, 2010: 50%; Canberra, 2009: 70%, 2010: 80%; Darwin, 2009: 70%, 2010: 80%; Melbourne, 2009: 60%, 2010: 80%; Sydney, 2009: 50%, 2010: 70%; Brisbane, 2009: 80%, 2010: 90%.

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The bar graph illustrate the changes in the reservoirs water level of six cities of Australia in October 2009 and October 2010.

Overall, most of the cities experienced a general increase in the rate of the water in reservoirs except for Perth and Sydney.

To begin with, Brisbane had the highest level of water in reservoirs, 80% in October 2009 and more than 90% in October 2010. Melbourne experienced the highest surge in reservoir water level, which rose from approximately 65% in October 2009 to reach 90% in October 2010, representing a 25% increase. Similarly, Canberra’s and Darwin’s reservoir water level also increased, from around 72% and 70% in October 2009 to approximately 82% and 80% in October 2010, respectively.

In contrast, Perth’s water reservoir rate fell from 55% in October 2009 to 35% in October 2010. The water level in Sydney’s reservoirs remained the same in both periods, at approximately 55%

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

october: 10

water: 7

level: 5

reservoirs: 4

reservoir: 3

approximately: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making comparisons. It correctly identifies the overall trend of increase in most cities and highlights the exceptions. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Melbourne's values, Perth's trend, Sydney's stability) and a few omissions (e.g., not mentioning all cities' exact figures). The structure is clear with an overview and detailed paragraphs, but the data errors slightly detract from the task achievement. To improve, ensure data accuracy and include all relevant details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overview and paragraphs for increases and decreases. However, the final sentence about Sydney is incomplete, which disrupts the flow. Ensure all sentences are complete and ideas are fully developed. The use of cohesive devices is adequate, but could be more varied to enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'surge', 'experienced', 'rose'). However, there are minor inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'reservoirs water level' and 'the rate of the water in reservoirs'. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations, and ensure consistent terminology. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues. For example, 'The bar graph illustrate' should be 'The bar graph illustrates', and 'reservoirs water level' should be 'reservoir water levels'. The final sentence is incomplete. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, use of articles, and sentence completeness. Also, vary sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range.

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