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Band 6+: The given pie charts illustrate how dangerous waste products are treated in three different countries, including the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom

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The image presents pie charts illustrating waste disposal methods in three nations. Republic of Korea: Recycling 69%, Incineration 9%, Underground 22%. Sweden: Recycling 25%, Incineration 20%, Underground 55%. United Kingdom: Recycling 0%, Incineration 2%, Underground 82%, Chemical Treatment 8%, Dumping at Sea 8%.

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The provided pie charts demonstrates the means on how the three different countries, Republic of Korea, Swden and United Kingdom deal with dangerous products.

Overall, both Sweden and the United kingdom prefer burying harmful waste undergroud. Unlike both, Republic of Korea leans towards recycling rather than incineration and burying.

According to the United kingdom, underground burying constitues for 82% of treating harmful products. While both chemical treatment and dumping wastes at the sea represents an identical percentage of 8, incineration follows behind at 2%, being the least method used for getting rid of biohazards.

Turning to Sweden, it is comparable to the United kingdom with respect to using underground burying as the main treatment to wastes; however, the percentage differs by being 55%. The remaining 45% is divided between recycling and incineration where recycling surpasses incineration by5%.

Lastly, Republic of korea is comparable to Sweden in terms of leaning towards similar measures of treatment. In contrast, more than half of the treatment is done by recycling which makes up 65%, followed by underground burrying responsible for 22% and leaving 9% to incineration

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incineration: 5

united: 4

kingdom: 4

recycling: 4

treatment: 4

republic: 3

korea: 3

sweden: 3

burying: 3

underground: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and describing the main features of the charts for each country. The structure is clear, with a logical progression from the overview to specific details. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., recycling in Korea is stated as 65% instead of 69%, and the difference between recycling and incineration in Sweden is described as 5% instead of 5 percentage points). Additionally, there are minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'demonstrates' should be 'demonstrate', 'constitues' should be 'constitutes', 'burrying' should be 'burying'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and refine language for clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and paragraphs for each country. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'According to the United kingdom' and 'Turning to Sweden'). The use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical, and the paragraphing could be improved by more clearly separating the discussion of each country. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that transitions between ideas are smoother.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to waste treatment (e.g., 'recycling', 'incineration', 'underground burying', 'chemical treatment', 'dumping at sea'). There is some attempt at paraphrasing and using synonyms (e.g., 'dangerous products', 'harmful products', 'biohazards'). However, there are inaccuracies and awkward collocations (e.g., 'constitues for', 'leans towards', 'surpasses by5%'). To improve, focus on using precise and natural vocabulary, and avoid literal translations or informal phrases.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'demonstrates' should be 'demonstrate', 'Swden' is a typo, 'undergroud' is misspelled, and 'constitues for' is incorrect. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. The range of sentence structures is limited, and some sentences are run-ons or lack proper punctuation. To improve, review basic grammar rules, proofread for spelling errors, and vary sentence structures to demonstrate greater control.

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