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Band 4+: The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

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The image shows participant numbers for five activities from 2000 to 2020: Film club (2000-67, 2005-65, 2010-59, 2015-63, 2020-67), Martial arts (2000-45, 2005-48, 2010-47, 2015-42, 2020-36), Amateur dramatics (2000-34, 2005-31, 2010-25, 2015-22, 2020-11), Table tennis (2000-27, 2005-32, 2010-27, 2015-25, 2020-46), Musical performances (2000-11, 2005-18, 2010-28, 2015-36, 2020-21).
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This graph illustrates the data about how many people participated in different activities at one centre in Melbourne, Australia for 20 years

In general, in this graph, we can easily see the trend of participants in film club, it was the real dominant for this period. In addition it is remarkable that followers in table tennis had a significant change

Firstly, it is noticeable that untill 2005 no one participated in musical performances. But overtime it has a slight increase in 2020 compared to 2000. Followers to amateur dramatics had a dramatical fall, while the participants of table tennis has changed a lot

During this period of time without any doubts film club participants was a real dominant and in the future it is going to be lime that. During 20 years the starting and finishing point has not changed. Another activitie that has been stabilized was martial arts. The graph shows that it has a bit fluctuation, but in general, it has not changed significantly

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

5.5
The report provides a good overview of the main features of the graph, but it misses some important details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the significant increase in table tennis participants from 2015 to 2020.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The report is generally coherent, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The use of paragraphs is also inconsistent.

Lexical Resource

5
The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The vocabulary is not always precise or sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of tenses and punctuation is inconsistent.

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