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Band 5+: The graph below shows the average number of people attending top-level football matches in three European countries from 1980 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image shows a line graph depicting the average attendance per top-level football match from 1980 to 2004. In 1980, Italy had around 37, England 32, Germany 25. In 1986, Italy saw a slight drop to 36, England dropped to 24, Germany stayed constant at 25. By 1992, Italy declined further to 28, England peaked to 35, Germany remained at 25. In 1998, Italy continued to fall to 23, England declined slightly to 32, Germany started rising to 26. In 2004, Italy dropped further to 22, England marginally declined to 28, and Germany sharply rose to 35.

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The line graph illustrates the number of people attending top level football matches in Italy, England and Germany over a 24 years , beginning at 1980

Overall, the number of people attending top level football matches in Italy decreased significantly, while the number of people from England and Germamy saw sharp climb. Notably, the highest number of people attended from Italy at the beginning of period , later it was overtaken by England and Germany

Looking at downword trend first Italy experienced a slight climb from 35 thousand in 1980 to 37 thousand by 1986. By contrast, this number desreased steeply to 25 by 2005.

Turning to upword trends, England stood at 25 in 1980 , before declining slightly to 23 by 1986, after which it witnesed an enormous boom to 34 by 2004. Similar pattern of growth was observed in Germany ,stood at 25 in 1980 , before declining minimally to 18 by 1986, in contrast it was a substansial peak to 34 by 2004

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by describing trends in football match attendance for the three countries. However, there are notable inaccuracies in the data: for example, Italy's attendance is reported as increasing initially, whereas the graph shows a decline; England's and Germany's figures also deviate from the visual. The overview is partially correct but misses key comparisons, such as Germany's stable period and Italy's continuous decline. The report is generally organized, but some sentences are unclear and there are spelling errors (e.g., 'Germamy', 'downword', 'desreased'). To improve, ensure accurate reading of the graph, provide a clearer overview of main trends, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for downward and upward trends. However, the flow is disrupted by several issues: the overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly highlight the most significant changes (e.g., Germany's sharp rise and Italy's decline). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Looking at downword trend first' and 'Turning to upword trends' are awkward and not well integrated). Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to separate key trends and comparisons. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use a wider range of linking words and phrases to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report attempts to use a range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'decreased significantly', 'sharp climb', 'slight climb', 'declining slightly', 'enormous boom', 'substansial peak'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'Germamy', 'downword', 'upword', 'desreased', 'witnesed', 'substansial') and some awkward or inaccurate word choices (e.g., 'number of people from England and Germamy saw sharp climb' should be 'the number of people attending matches in England and Germany saw a sharp climb'). The range is adequate but not fully flexible, and the control is not consistently accurate. To improve, proofread for spelling, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'experienced a gradual decline', 'witnessed a significant surge'), and ensure collocations are natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the number of people from England and Germamy saw' should be 'the number of people ... saw' is correct but the sentence is awkward), incorrect use of articles (e.g., 'over a 24 years' should be 'over a 24-year period'), and missing or incorrect prepositions (e.g., 'beginning at 1980' should be 'beginning in 1980'). There are also tense inconsistencies and sentence fragments (e.g., 'Looking at downword trend first Italy experienced...' is a dangling modifier). The range of grammatical structures is limited, with mostly simple and compound sentences. To improve, focus on sentence structure, proofread for common errors, and practice using a variety of complex structures (e.g., subordinate clauses, relative clauses) with accurate punctuation.

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