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Band 4+: The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph with two lines, one solid representing shop closures and one dashed representing shop openings from 2011 to 2018. In 2011, shop closures were around 5400, increasing to 7300 in 2012, decreasing to around 6900 in 2013, then rising to 8000 in 2014, dropping to around 5800 in 2015, 4600 in 2016, then increasing to 5400 in 2017 and 6600 in 2018. Shop openings started around 5900 in 2011, dropped to around 5600 in 2012, rose to around 7000 in 2013, then decreased to 6900 in 2014, dropped drastically to around 3200 in 2015, then increased to around 5500 in 2016, 5800 in 2017 and 6300 in 2018. Closures were consistently higher than openings except in 2013 and 2014.

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The line graph diplays the sum of shops in one country, broken down by closure and opening shops in 2011 to 2018.It can be seen that the highest opening shop of for more than 8.000 in 2011. However, the opening fluctuated decrease in 2012 and 2018.

Firstly, the opening of shops has the greatest rate in 2018. Unfortunately, the rate dramatically knocked down in 2012 from 8500 to 4000. Therefore, it was going up from 2013 to 2014 and the sum has fallen again in 2015 and it run smoothly in 4000 rate until 2017 before it go down in 2018.

Secondly, the shop closure has an upward trend for more than 7000 shops in 2013 and significantly decreased below 1000 shops in 2015. Moreover, it kept stable in from 2016 to 2018.

In conclusion, it seems clear that both of shop opening and closure having down ward issue in 2015. On the other hand they had the greatest rate in 2011 for the opening and 2013 in for the closure.

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shops: 5

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The response provides a general overview of the information presented in the graph, but there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The trends and comparisons are not consistently addressed, and the report lacks specific data from the graph.

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The message is somewhat difficult to follow due to the lack of clear organization and coherence. There are issues with paragraphing, and the progression of ideas is not always smooth. Additionally, there are some inaccuracies in the use of cohesive devices.

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but it is not always accurate or precise. The report also lacks sophistication in the choice of words, and there are some noticeable errors in word form and usage.

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