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Band 4+: The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph with two lines, one solid representing shop closures and one dashed representing shop openings from 2011 to 2018. In 2011, shop closures were around 5400, increasing to 7300 in 2012, decreasing to around 6900 in 2013, then rising to 8000 in 2014, dropping to around 5800 in 2015, 4600 in 2016, then increasing to 5400 in 2017 and 6600 in 2018. Shop openings started around 5900 in 2011, dropped to around 5600 in 2012, rose to around 7000 in 2013, then decreased to 6900 in 2014, dropped drastically to around 3200 in 2015, then increased to around 5500 in 2016, 5800 in 2017 and 6300 in 2018. Closures were consistently higher than openings except in 2013 and 2014.

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The presented graph indicates some data about figures of closed shops and recent shops in a country from 2011 to 2018. Overall, it can be seen that there has been a slight decrease in closed shops in these years. While the amount of opened shops has ‌drastically dropped in this period.

Considering the first 4 years, the closed shops have been stabled. Whereas new shops have been experienced it`s most fluctuation. Between 2014 and 2016, the least amount of closed shops is remarkable. This means owners are not volunteered to give up their career ladder. For opened shops, numbers have been slowly dropped from 6,000 to 4,000. Finally, for the rest of the years, opened shops experienced the same trend and closed shops have stayed at 5,000.

In conclusion, by reviewing both of these trends, it seems that most of the businessmen and businesswomen are departing from their occupation. Moreover, people in 2011 were not as interested in starting a new career rather than individuals in 2018.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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shops: 10

closed: 5

years: 3

opened: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the trends in closed and opened shops, but it lacks specific data and comparisons as requested in the task. The trends are not consistently and accurately described, and the comparison between closed and opened shops is not effectively presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some coherence and cohesion, but there are issues with paragraphing and the logical progression of ideas. The report lacks clear and consistent paragraph structure, and the ideas are not always logically organized.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited, and there are some inaccuracies and awkward word choices. Additionally, there is a lack of precise and varied vocabulary to describe the trends in closed and opened shops.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There is a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors and inaccuracies. Punctuation is also inconsistent, and there are issues with subject-verb agreement and word choice.

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