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Band 4+: The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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The image presents a line graph comparing shop closures and openings from 2011 to 2018. In 2011, closures were around 5,000 and openings just under 2,000. Closures peaked in 2012 at over 8,000 while openings remained steady. From 2013 to 2016, closures declined to below 4,000 while openings increased to over 3,000. In 2017, closures rose slightly above 4,000 and openings fell to around 2,500. By 2018, closures dropped to approximately 4,000 and openings remained close to the previous year. Overall, shop closures consistently outnumbered openings except for 2014 when they were nearly equal.

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The line graph presents the number of stores that closed and the number of fresh shops that opened in one notion from 2011 to 2018 .the number of closures and openings between 1,000 and 9,000

Overall,the number of stores closures changed a lot from 2011 to 2018.Moreover ,it wildly rose and fall.the openings of shops stayed unchanged in the final two years.

Despite the fact that number of stored closures remained static at around 7,000 between 2011 and 2014 ,it dramatically reduced in 2015.It accounted for just over 5,000 in 2016.The closures of stores stayed unchanged between 2016 and 2018.

In term of the number of shops openings,the figures reached 9,000 in 2011.It wildly rose and fall between 4,000 and 6,000 in from 2012 to 2015.The number of shops openings remained static from 2015 to 2017. Nevertheless it slightly decreased in 2018 and the number of stores openings were noted of 4,000 openings in 2018.The number of closures around 5,000.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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number: 9

closures: 5

openings: 5

stores: 4

shops: 4

between: 4

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5.5

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The student provides some general trends, but lacks specific details and comparisons.

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The report is divided into paragraphs, but the cohesion is not well-managed. The student uses transitional phrases, but they are not always logical. The text lacks a clear overview and the paragraphs do not flow smoothly.

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The student uses some basic vocabulary, but there are many errors in word choice and collocations. The language is not precise and lacks sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student uses simple sentence structures, but there are many grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and punctuation. The language is not accurate and lacks control.

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