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Band 4+: The graph below shows the percentage of percentage of female members in five European countries from 2000 to 2012.

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The image contains a graph with a y-axis labeled "Percentage," marked at intervals from 0-45% in increments of 5, and an unmarked x-axis; five lines representing countries—Belgium (orange), Spain (green), Germany (red), UK (blue), Italy (black)—depict fluctuating percentages over an unspecified time; Belgium peaks near 40% then dips to 35% before rising again, Spain starts just above 30%, dips below, and ends near start point, Germany begins just under 30%, peaks just above 35%, ends just below, UK starts at 0%, steeply rises to 20%, and flattens near 25%, Italy begins and stays at 0%.

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This graph illustrate the persentage of persentage members of female in five european countries from 2000 to 2012 .They are Belgium, UK, Italy ,Spain, and finally germany. We can discover that numerous countries increasing compared with the initial period.

The first we can see countries with majority members of female , this countries are Belgium and Spain . Belgium beginned around 24 thousand of people , they was large than UK and Italy . And Spain started around 28 thousand humans. They was remain stable in 2007 year.

Italy was the lowest figure at the beginning in this challenge , UK started 18 thousnd people and Italy increased considerably. Germany commenced this challange with significantly female members , and Germany was marginally increased . We can discover Italy was the sharply grew than other countries and remained stable at the end . However the substantial rate was Belgium .

In conclusion we can discover that all european countries increased , this is a remarcably good figure.

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countries: 6

belgium: 4

italy: 4

members: 3

female: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and omissions. It misinterprets the data (e.g., referring to percentages as 'thousand of people'), misstates trends (e.g., claiming Italy increased sharply when it remained at 0%), and omits key details such as the UK's steep rise and Germany's peak. The structure is somewhat disorganized, and there are numerous grammatical and spelling errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately describing the main trends, comparing countries appropriately, and using precise data from the graph. Ensure the report is well-paragraphed and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and logical progression. The introduction is repetitive and unclear, and the body paragraphs do not follow a coherent order (e.g., discussing Belgium and Spain, then Italy and UK, then Germany). The conclusion is too brief and does not summarize the main trends effectively. Use clear paragraphing and organize the information by time periods or by comparing countries systematically. Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and that transitions between ideas are smooth.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often imprecise. There are frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'persentage', 'european', 'beginned', 'thousnd', 'remarcably') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'challenge' instead of 'period', 'humans' instead of 'people'). The report lacks the range of vocabulary needed to describe trends accurately (e.g., 'fluctuate', 'peak', 'dip', 'plateau'). Use a wider range of precise terms for describing data, and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'This graph illustrate', 'They was'), incorrect verb tenses, and missing articles. Sentence structures are mostly simple and repetitive. The report would benefit from using a variety of complex structures, such as relative clauses and conditional sentences, and from ensuring consistent and accurate use of past tense. Proofreading for basic grammar and punctuation is essential.

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