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Band 6+: The graph below shows the price of different kinds of bread in dollars from 2001 to 2005. Compare the trends and write a report.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Price of bread, 2001-2005", with a vertical axis scaled from 0 to 2 in increments of 0.2 and a horizontal axis showing years from 2001 to 2005. Four types of bread are tracked: Wholegrain values are 0.8 in 2001, 1.8 in 2002, 1.0 in 2003, 0.7 in 2004, and 0.8 in 2005; Brown values are 0.6 in 2001, 1.5 in 2002, 1.6 in 2003, 1.4 in 2004, and 1.6 in 2005; White values are 0.6 in 2001, 1.0 in 2002, 1.1 in 2003, 1.2 in 2004, and 1.3 in 2005; Rye values are 0.6 in 2001, 0.5 in 2002, 0.6 in 2003, 0.6 in 2004, and 0.7 in 2005.

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The line chart provides key information about the cost of five different types of bread in dollars during the period from 2001 to 2005.

Overall, it is clear from the graph that wholegrain bread at the beginning of the period got a lower price. However, in the middle of the period the price increased significantly then, the price started to fluctate towards the end of the period. In addition, rye bread experienced a lower cost from the beginning to the end of the period. Moreover, both white and brown bread experienced fluctating costs.

According to what is shown, wholegrain price in 2001 was 0.8, while in 2002 the value drameticaly increased to 1.8 dollar. Furthermore, between 2002 and 2003 the amount decreaced to 1 dollar and started to fluctate towards the end of the period. On the other hand, the amount of brown bread in 2001 was 0.6, then the cost has increased in 2002 approximatley to 1.5 dollar. Additionaly, the price rose in 2003 to 1.6 dollar and fluctated until the end.

In terms of white bread&rye bread, in 2001 the value of the white bread and rye bread was the same which is 0.6 dollar. Furthermore, the value of white bread increased in 2002 it was 1 dollar, whereas the amount of rye bread decreased to slightly over 0.4 dollar. The price of the white bread increase from 1 dollar to approximatley 1.3 dollar in 2005. However, the amount of rye bread had risen to about 0.7 dollar.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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bread: 12

dollar: 10

period: 6

price: 6

white: 5

increased: 4

amount: 4

value: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main trends and providing specific data for each bread type. The overall structure is logical, with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report mentions 'five different types' instead of four, and the description of wholegrain bread's initial price as 'lower' is misleading. Additionally, some data points are slightly off (e.g., rye bread's 2002 value is stated as 'slightly over 0.4' instead of 0.5). The language is generally clear, but there are spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'fluctate', 'drameticaly', 'decreaced', 'approximatley', 'Additionaly'). To improve, ensure accurate data representation, correct the number of bread types, and proofread for spelling and grammar.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the price started to fluctate towards the end of the period' is vague). The use of cohesive devices is basic and occasionally repetitive. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic. Also, avoid overusing 'in addition' and 'furthermore'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variety (e.g., 'experienced', 'fluctuated', 'increased significantly'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'fluctate', 'drameticaly', 'decreaced', 'approximatley', 'Additionaly') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'got a lower price' instead of 'had a lower price'). To improve, proofread for spelling and use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'witnessed a sharp rise' or 'remained relatively stable'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, missing commas after introductory phrases, incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'the cost has increased' should be 'the cost increased'), and run-on sentences (e.g., 'the value of white bread increased in 2002 it was 1 dollar'). To improve, focus on sentence structure, use a wider range of grammatical structures, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout.

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