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The image displays a line graph titled 'Proportion of population aged 65 and over' showing percentage data for the USA, Sweden, and Japan from 1940 to 2040. The vertical axis ranges from 0% to 30%. For the USA, the percentages at each measured year were approximately: 1940 (9%), 1960 (10%), 1980 (11%), 2000 (13%), 2020 (14%), and 2040 (23%). For Sweden, the data points were: 1940 (~7%), 1960 (10%), 1980 (15%), 2000 (~14%), 2020 (20%), and 2040 (25%). For Japan, the corresponding figures were approximately: 1940 (5%), 1960 (4%), 1980 (3%), 2000 (5%), 2020 (7%), and 2040 (27%).

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The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over across the ages (from 1940 until 2040) in three different countries (Japan, Sweden and USA).

Overall, population of people aged 65 and over, remained with low levels for around 20 years and eventually increased over the years. According to the estimation, the elderly population will sharply increase around 2030s for all three countries.

In Japan, older people population graph began at 5% in 1940 and decreased for around 2% until gradually rising after 1980s to 10% in around 2030s. An estimation proposes that Japan’s graph will rise sharply in 2030s.

USA almost doubled Japan’s percentage at the starting point with 9% of elderly people population in 1940. USA had reached its first factual peak in 1960 with solid 15% but gradually declined. The estimation proposes USA’s graph steadily increasing after their second peak in around 2020s. Sweden is halfway between Japan and USA with initial level of around 7%. Sweden has insignificant falls across the years, but still remained factual leader, reaching the highest peak of 20% around 2010s. After a short decline, Sweden will also estimately grow in percentage after 2020s.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and some confusion in the data description. For example, the USA's peak is incorrectly stated as 15% in 1960, whereas the data shows it was around 10% at that time. Additionally, the description of Japan's trend is somewhat unclear, and the report omits specific data points for 2040, which are important for a complete summary. To improve, ensure that all key data points are accurately reported and that the trends are described clearly and consistently. Focus on presenting the main features and comparisons without introducing errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs for each country. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'across the ages', 'remained with low levels', 'estimately grow'). The paragraphing is logical, but the cohesion within and between sentences could be improved for smoother reading. Use clearer linking words and ensure each sentence logically connects to the next.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'sharply increase', 'gradually rising', 'steadily increasing', 'decline'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'factual peak', 'factual leader', 'estimately grow', 'insignificant falls'). To improve, use more precise and natural collocations (e.g., 'significant drop', 'projected to rise', 'remained relatively stable') and avoid repetitive phrasing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity (e.g., 'population of people aged 65 and over, remained with low levels', 'decreased for around 2%', 'will also estimately grow'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons or lack proper subject-verb agreement. To improve, focus on sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and using more accurate grammatical forms (e.g., 'is projected to increase' instead of 'will estimately grow').

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