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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the number of international tourists (in millions) who visited three different countries from 2010 to 2030.

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The image features a line graph titled "Number of International Tourists Visiting Three Countries (2010–2030)" with a vertical y-axis measuring "Number of Tourists (millions)" from 0 to 60 in increments of 10, and a horizontal x-axis measuring "Year" with points at 2010, 2015, 2020, 2025*, and 2030*, accompanied by a note stating "* Figures for 2025 and 2030 are projections." Solid lines connect data points through 2020 and dashed lines represent projections from 2020 to 2030. For Country A, the values are 20 in 2010, 25 in 2015, 35 in 2020, 45 in 2025*, and 55 in 2030*. For Country B, the values are 15 in 2010, 20 in 2015, 30 in 2020, 35 in 2025*, and 40 in 2030*. For Country C, the values are 10 in 2010, 15 in 2015, 12 in 2020, 18 in 2025*, and 22 in 2030*.

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The line graph depicts the number of international tourists who visited three different countries – Country A, Country B and Country C – measured in millions, between 2010 and 2030.

Overall, both Country A and Country B showed a upward trend, while Country C increased by experiencing fluctuation over the period, Among 20-years period all Countries kept their order in popularity.

Country A began at 20 million in 2010 and increased steadily, before experiencing a significant rise by 2015 and peaked at 55 million in 2030. Similarly, Country B was the second most popular country at the beginning of the period, increased steadily by 2015, before experiencing a steed rise and reached to 40 million at the end of the period.

By contrast, Country C was the least popular country in 2010, before showing a fluctuation by 2020 and decreased steadily and reached at 12 million in 2020. Although experienced fluctuation, Country C increased steadily and reach 22 million in 2030.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

country: 11

million: 5

increased: 4

steadily: 4

experiencing: 3

fluctuation: 3

period: 3

before: 3

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Task Response

The response appropriately addresses the task by describing the trends for all three countries over the given period. It includes an overview and key data points, though some minor inaccuracies and omissions are present (e.g., the description of Country C's trend is slightly unclear, and the projection aspect is not explicitly mentioned). The language is generally clear, but there are occasional grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately described and use more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, overall trend, and body paragraphs. However, there are some issues with coherence and cohesion. For example, the phrase 'Among 20-years period all Countries kept their order in popularity' is awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity. Additionally, the use of 'before' in 'increased steadily, before experiencing a significant rise' is slightly confusing as it suggests a sequence that may not be accurate. The paragraphing is logical, but transitions between ideas could be smoother. To improve, consider using more varied cohesive devices and ensuring that each sentence flows naturally into the next.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at variation (e.g., 'depicts', 'fluctuation', 'peaked'). However, there are instances of inappropriate word choice and collocation errors, such as 'steed rise' (likely meant 'steep rise') and 'reached to' (should be 'reached'). Additionally, 'increased by experiencing fluctuation' is awkward. To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and avoid repetitive use of 'increased' and 'steadily'. Try to incorporate more sophisticated lexical items where appropriate. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'a upward trend' should be 'an upward trend', 'steed rise' should be 'steep rise', and 'reached to' should be 'reached'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and tense consistency, such as 'Although experienced fluctuation' (missing subject) and 'reach' instead of 'reached'. Punctuation is mostly correct, but there are minor errors like the comma splice in 'over the period, Among 20-years period'. To improve, proofread carefully for basic errors and practice using a wider range of complex structures accurately.

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