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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the number of overseas tourists (in millions) who visited France, Spain, and Japan between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled 'Number of Overseas Tourists (in millions), 1990-2020', tracking three countries. France's tourist numbers in millions were: 1990 (45), 1995 (50), 2000 (55), 2005 (60), 2010 (70), 2015 (75), and 2020 (~82). Spain's figures were: 1990 (30), 1995 (35), 2000 (40), 2005 (50), 2010 (60), 2015 (~68), and 2020 (75). Japan's data was: 1990 (40), 1995 (~42), 2000 (43), 2005 (41), 2010 (38), 2015 (36), and 2020 (34).

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The line chart illustrates the percentage of overseas tourists who traveled to three different countries over 30-year period from 1990 to 2020 in millions.

Overall, it is clear that the number of visitors increased gradually in France and Spain over the period, whereas the number of people who visited Japan experienced a decline .

Out of the three countries France had the highest figur.In 1990,there were about 45,000,000 person traveled to France to rose significantly to nearly 80,000,000 in 2020. similarly,Spain grew from 30 million to just over 75,000,000 between 1990 and 2020.

Looking at the information in more detail , Japan visitors were approximately 40 million ,then it peak the highest number of tourists at around 43 million in 2020 before it experienced a dramatic decrease to fell to 35 ,000,000 in 2020.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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france: 3

million: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general trends for all three countries and includes some specific data. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that affect clarity. For instance, the report states that Japan peaked in 2020, which is incorrect; the peak was around 2000. Additionally, the data for France and Spain are not precisely reported, and the report lacks a clear comparison between the countries. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately described, and make more explicit comparisons, such as noting that France consistently had the highest numbers, while Japan's figures declined over the period. Also, proofread for grammatical errors and ensure the word count meets the requirement. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and a detailed paragraph. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors (e.g., missing spaces after commas, run-on sentences). The final paragraph is somewhat confusing due to incorrect time references and unclear sequencing. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') more effectively to link sentences and ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for the task (e.g., 'illustrates', 'experienced a decline', 'rose significantly'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'figur' instead of 'figure', 'person traveled' instead of 'people travelled', 'peak the highest number' instead of 'peaked at'). To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and avoid repetition. Use synonyms and more sophisticated expressions to describe trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('over 30-year period'), incorrect verb forms ('to rose' should be 'rose'), and subject-verb agreement ('person traveled' should be 'people travelled'). Additionally, there are run-on sentences and incorrect time references (e.g., 'in 2020' instead of 'in 2000'). To improve, focus on proofreading for grammar and punctuation, and practice using a wider range of sentence structures with accurate control.

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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the number of overseas tourists (in millions) who visited France, Spain, and Japan between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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