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Band 6+: The line graph below shows the number of visitors to a museum between 2005 and 2015.

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The image shows a line graph depicting the number of museum visitors (in thousands) from 2005-2015, with numerical data: 2005 has 9,000 visitors, 2006 shows a decline to 8,000 visitors, 2007 rises to 10,000 visitors, 2008 reaches 13,000 visitors, 2009 rises to 14,000 visitors, 2010 maintains 14,000 visitors, 2011 remains constant at 14,000 visitors, 2012 increases to 16,000 visitors, 2013 stays at 16,000 visitors, 2014 climbs to 18,000 visitors, and 2015 peaks at 20,000 visitors.

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The line graph ommited illustrates the number of attendees to a museum from the year 2005 to 2015. Overall, the graph generally showed an upward trend throughout the years and reaching its utmost peak in 2015.

During the first half of the graph, the amount of visitors suddenly plummeted to its lowest ever recorded amount in 2006 as it reached only 8000 people from the previous number of 10000 just a year before. Unexpectedly, the years after experienced a sudden increase of people with approximately 15000 visitors by 2010.

After 2010, the number of museum-goers stayed the same, neither incresing nor decreasing. However, during the year of 2013, a lot of more people started going to the museum reaching just below 1800. This trend continued on to the years of 2014 and 2015, accumulating to 19000 and 20000 respectively. Furthermore, the number of visitors in 2015 was the highest its ever been.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

number: 4

graph: 3

years: 3

visitors: 3

people: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and key data points from the graph. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., '10000' in 2005, '15000 visitors by 2010', 'just below 1800' in 2013, '19000' in 2014). Also, the writing could be more precise and avoid informal language ('a lot of more people'). To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and using more formal language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider using more precise transitional phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. For example, instead of starting the second paragraph with 'During the first half of the graph,' you could use a more specific time reference or a phrase that directly contrasts with the overall trend mentioned in the introduction. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect or period of the data to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more varied and precise. While terms like 'plummeted' and 'utmost peak' are appropriate, incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific descriptors would enhance the report. For instance, instead of 'suddenly plummeted,' consider using 'experienced a sharp decline.' Also, ensure that the numbers are accurately represented (e.g., 'just below 1800' is inaccurate based on the provided data).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and correct usage of articles and prepositions. For example, 'The line graph ommited illustrates' should be 'The line graph illustrates,' and 'a lot of more people' should be 'many more people.' Proofreading carefully and using grammar checking tools can help identify and correct these errors.

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