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Band 7+: The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two floor plans labeled "10 years ago" and "Today." Ten years ago, areas included Garden, Car park, Entrance, Reception, Storage, Hall (seats for 100), Coffee bar, Toilets, three Offices, Kitchen. Today, changes feature Indoor sports, alterations putting Storage and Toilets in new positions, a Cafe area replacing Coffee bar, and a reshuffle placing Kitchen, Office, Toilets distinctly different with maintained areas like Car park, Entrance, Reception, and Hall (seats for 100).

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The maps depict how a community center has changed since ten years ago.

Overall, some rooms were refunctioned and relocated with the removal of cafe area and garden while an indoor sports room was constructed. In spite of some changes, there were some spaces that remained untouched such as: entrance, car park, hall and kitchen.

In terms of the western side of the community center, there was a garden at the top but it was converted into an indoor sports area. The car park below it and an entrance at the bottom were left intact throughout the ten years period.

Moving to the middle of the community center, the storage at the top was shrinked a half into the left side to make space for toilets while the hall in the centre of the community center with one hundred seats stayed unchanged. On the south of the hall, the reception area and the cloakroom below it were left intact but the office on the right-handed side was separated into a coffee bar (at the opposite side of the reception area) and toilets.

Regarding the eastern side of the community center, four office rooms at the top and the storage below them were merged into a cafe area. The kitchen on the southern side of them was kept untouched throughout a 10-year period.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features and changes to the community center over the 10-year period. The organization is clear, with a logical progression from west to middle to east of the center. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., stating the kitchen remained untouched when it was relocated) and omissions (e.g., not mentioning the relocation of the kitchen and offices). To improve, ensure all significant changes are noted and verified for accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and overall structure. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall,' 'In terms of,' 'Moving to,' and 'Regarding' helps to guide the reader through the changes. However, there are instances where the transitions between ideas could be smoother. For example, the shift from the western side to the middle of the community center could be more explicitly linked. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the flow and connection between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to describing changes in a floor plan. Words like 'refunctioned,' 'relocated,' 'converted,' 'intact,' 'shrinked,' and 'merged' are used appropriately. However, there are opportunities to use more precise and sophisticated vocabulary to elevate the description. For instance, instead of 'shrinked a half,' you could use 'reduced in size by half.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition, such as varying how you describe areas that remained unchanged.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'the storage at the top was shrinked a half into the left side to make space for toilets' contains an awkward phrasing and a grammatical error ('shrinked' should be 'shrunk'). Also, the statement 'four office rooms at the top and the storage below them were merged into a cafe area' is not entirely accurate based on the visual description, as the kitchen was also affected. Pay closer attention to verb tenses, word choice, and sentence structure to improve accuracy. Proofreading carefully can help catch these errors.

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