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Band 7+: The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image includes a pie chart and a table with specific data. The pie chart illustrates the proportion of people living in Australia by their country of birth: Australia 73%, UK 7%, New Zealand 3%, China 2%, Netherlands 1%, Other 14%. The accompanying table details the residential distribution between cities and rural areas for these populations: UK 89% cities, 11% rural; Australia 83% cities, 17% rural; China 99% cities, 1% rural; New Zealand 80% cities, 20% rural; Netherlands 90% cities, 10% rural.

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The pie chart and bar chart depict the breakdown of the Australian population by means of birth and illustrate the residential areas of these groups in urban and rural environments. Overall, the highest percentage of residents are born in Australia, whereas the smallest birth rate belongs to Netherlands. Notably, the vast majority of people choose to live in urban areas, with Chinese-born residents demonstrating the highest proportion.

To begin with, most people living here choose to have children in Australia, making the birth rate in Australia dominant, accounting for 73%, followed by other countries at 14%. The UK constitutes 7%; however, China, New Zealand, and the Netherlands close the list with almost similar percentages, making up under 3%.

When it comes to the population rate in towns, Chinese residents are the highest, composing 99%. The Netherlands and the UK share nearly similar rates, standing at 90% and 89%, respectively. Australia accounts for 83%, which is higher than the percentage of people living in New Zealand cities for 3%.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

australia: 4

birth: 3

highest: 3

residents: 3

netherlands: 3

people: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the data, including the overall trend and key comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the visual is described as a 'bar chart' instead of a table, and the rural percentages are not mentioned. Additionally, the phrase 'choose to have children in Australia' is misleading; it should refer to people born in Australia. To improve, ensure accurate terminology, include all data categories (e.g., rural figures), and avoid ambiguous phrasing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall structure: an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'To begin with', and 'When it comes to' helps guide the reader. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'most people living here choose to have children in Australia' which is awkward and slightly off-topic, and the final sentence could be clearer. Paragraphing is logical, but the second body paragraph could be more tightly linked to the first. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic and use a wider range of linking words and referencing to enhance flow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'breakdown', 'residential areas', 'urban and rural environments', 'dominant', 'constitutes', and 'composing'. There is evidence of flexibility and some less common items. However, there are a few inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'by means of birth' (should be 'by country of birth'), 'birth rate' (should be 'proportion of people born'), and 'population rate in towns' (should be 'proportion living in cities'). The phrase 'close the list' is informal. To achieve a higher score, use more precise and natural collocations, and avoid repetition of 'rate' and 'percentage'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of passive voice. There are no significant grammar errors, and punctuation is generally correct. The grammar checker indicates virtually no issues. However, there are a few minor awkward constructions, such as 'most people living here choose to have children in Australia' which is grammatically correct but semantically odd, and 'which is higher than the percentage of people living in New Zealand cities for 3%' which is slightly unclear. To reach a band 9, ensure that all sentences are not only grammatically correct but also clear and natural, and vary sentence structures more.

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