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Band 5+: The pie charts below show units of electricity produced by fuel source in Denmark and Germany in 1978 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows four pie charts illustrating electricity units by fuel source, alongside a legend for Coal, Oil, Natural Gas, Hydro Power, and Nuclear Power. For Denmark in 1978, total production was 90 units, comprising Coal 53, Oil 15, Natural Gas 7, and Hydro Power 15. In 1998, Denmark's total production was 160 units, with Coal at 122, Oil at 2, Natural Gas at 2, and Hydro Power at 34. For Germany in 1978, total production was 80 units, sourced from Coal 22, Oil 20, Natural Gas 22, Hydro Power 5, and Nuclear Power 11. In 1998, Germany's total production was 160 units, with Coal at 20, Oil at 20, Natural Gas at 6, Hydro Power at 3, and Nuclear Power at 111.

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The given pie charts provide information about the units of electricity produced by fuel source in Denmark and Germany between 1978 and 1998.

Overall, it can be seen that some visible comparatively ups and downs occurred between electricity produced by fuel source. The highest proportion was for coal, while the lowest proportion was for oil and natural gas.

According to the pie chart, in 1978, total electricity production increased from 90 units to 160 units during the year of 1998. Moreover, the amount oy coal produced in Denmark climbed by 69 units, from 53 units to 122 units between 1978 and 1998. Conversely, in Denmark, oil and natural gas were 7 units and 15 units, and it dramatically declined mere 2 units both fuel between 1978 and 1998.

In terms of the remaining fuel sources, in Germany, natural gas was 22 units in 1978, which decreased to 6 units in 1998. However, there was an increase of 100 units in the amount of nuclear power production, from 11 units to 111 units over 20 years.

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units: 14

between: 4

electricity: 3

produced: 3

denmark: 3

natural: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies key trends, such as the significant increase in coal production in Denmark and nuclear power in Germany. However, the overview is somewhat vague and could be more descriptive regarding the overall shifts in energy reliance. There are some inaccuracies in data reporting (e.g., swapping the values for oil and natural gas in Denmark) and some grammatical issues that occasionally obscure clarity. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately attributed to their respective categories and focus on making the overview more impactful by summarizing the most significant changes across both countries.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is sometimes disjointed. The overview is somewhat vague and uses awkward phrasing ('visible comparatively ups and downs'), which obscures the main trends. While you use some cohesive devices like 'Moreover', 'Conversely', and 'In terms of', they are not always used effectively to link complex ideas. To improve, ensure that your overview clearly summarizes the most significant trends (e.g., the dominance of coal in Denmark and nuclear power in Germany) rather than using generalities. Work on smoother transitions between sentences to ensure the reader can follow your logic effortlessly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several errors that affect clarity. Phrases such as 'amount oy coal' (typo) and 'dramatically declined mere 2 units both fuel' are non-standard and difficult to interpret. There is a repetitive use of basic words like 'units' and 'produced'. To reach a higher band, aim for a wider range of academic vocabulary to describe changes (e.g., 'surged', 'plummeted', 'remained stable') and use more precise collocations. Avoid imprecise phrasing like 'visible comparatively ups and downs'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede communication. For example, 'total electricity production increased... during the year of 1998' is logically flawed as it implies the increase happened within a single year rather than over a period. There are issues with sentence construction, such as 'it dramatically declined mere 2 units both fuel', which lacks proper prepositional use and subject-verb agreement. Focus on mastering sentence structures for comparison and describing trends, and pay close attention to prepositions and articles.

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