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Band 8+: The younger sister of one of your friends is thinking about spending a year studying abroad as part of her university course. You did this recently, and she has asked you about your experience. Write a letter to your friend's sister. In your letter • tell her where you studied during your year abroad • describe what you learnt about the country you studied in • explain why your year abroad was helpful for your studies

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Dear Sarah,

I hope all is fine. I heard from Susan that you are planning to spend a year abroad for your studies; therefore, I decided to write to share my own experience with you.

As Susan might have told you, while I was studying medicine in Iran, I decided to apply for an additional pathology course in USA, considering my personal interests and my desire to pursue pathology as my future career. Fortunately, I was accepted at Harvard University and studied there from October 2023 to December 2024.

Apart from a fascinating educational opportunity that Harvard provided, I learned a lot about USA while living there. Boston itself has a pretty rich historical background, and I could learn about that by visiting a couple of well-known museums there. Furthermore, since it is a very hospitable city to immigrants, you are encountered with a great cultural diversity and can get familiar with them by socializing.

I believe that one year in Harvard was an exceptional experience for me, because I had the chance to study in one of the top-ranked universities in the field of pathology. I could also build many connections and receive recommendation letters from experts, which will definitely help me with my future applications. Moreover, I learned multiple novel laboratory techniques and gained some hands-on experience in small animal surgery which is one of the requirements of clinical pathology.

I hope that my experience will be helpful. Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information. I would be pleased to help.

All the best,

Parisa

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8.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

experience: 4

pathology: 3

harvard: 3

there: 3

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Task Response

The letter fully addresses all parts of the task. The candidate provides specific details for each bullet point: the location (Harvard, USA), what was learned about the country (history and cultural diversity), and how it helped their studies (networking, recommendation letters, and practical skills). The tone is appropriate for a friend's sister, and the structure is logical and well-organized. No significant improvements are required as the response is comprehensive and well-developed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is exceptionally well-organized. The progression of ideas is logical, moving smoothly from the introduction to the specific details of the location, the cultural experience, and finally the academic benefits. Paragraphing is used skillfully to separate the different bullet points of the task, making the message effortless to follow. Cohesive devices like 'Furthermore', 'Moreover', and 'Apart from' are used naturally and do not distract the reader.

Lexical Resource

You have used a wide range of sophisticated vocabulary, such as 'fascinating educational opportunity', 'hospitable', 'cultural diversity', and 'hands-on experience'. The terminology related to your field (pathology, clinical pathology, laboratory techniques) is used accurately. To reach a perfect score, ensure that articles are used consistently (e.g., 'in the USA' instead of 'in USA') and watch for minor phrasing issues like 'you are encountered with' which could be more naturally expressed as 'you will encounter'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a high level of grammatical control with a good mix of complex sentence structures. You successfully use subordinate clauses and various tenses to convey meaning. There are a few minor errors regarding article usage (e.g., 'in USA' should be 'in the USA') and some slightly awkward phrasing ('you are encountered with'), but these do not impede communication. Improving the precision of article usage and prepositional phrases will help achieve full accuracy.

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