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Band 7+: Write a letter to the bank manager requesting for information about the bank loan and in your letter, write the following: - Why you are writing the letter - What is the amount of bank loan you need - When you are able to repay the loan

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the bank loan options for starting a bakery business specializing in cakes.

As a passionate baker with several years of experience in the cake making field I would appreciate it if you could provide me with detailed information regarding the loan application process, interest rates, and any other relevant terms….

To fund this venture, I am seeking a loan of $20,000. This amount will enable me to cover initial expenses, including equipment, ingredients, and marketing efforts.

I anticipate that I will be able to begin repaying the loan within two years of starting the business, as I expect to generate stable revenue shortly after the launch. I am confident in my business plan and my ability to manage the finances effectively.

I anticipate repaying the availed loan within a period of two years from the launch of my business. I am confident in my business plan and my ability to manage the finances effectively.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Seema

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 5

years: 3

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Task Response

8

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The purpose is clearly stated, the loan amount is specified, and a repayment timeframe is provided. Minor improvements in clarity could further enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

7

The letter flows logically, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Paragraphing is effective. Minor improvements in sentence flow and transitions would enhance cohesion.

Lexical Resource

8

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, used accurately and appropriately. More sophisticated vocabulary choices could elevate the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7

The letter displays a good range of grammatical structures. While mostly accurate, a few minor grammatical errors were present. Improved accuracy would enhance the score.

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