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Band 5+: write a letterto the singer in your letter say how you feel about his performance ,give details of your musical activities ,explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear sir,

Hope you are doing well,i am your bigest fain .Mostly i hear your song ,during travillang , diffrent parties like ,birthday ,mariges and getto gathers and so on.

Anyhow know i specially write about the concert which is held at BHOTTO PARK in mirpur azad kashmir. avery big crowed overtheir .so many peoples only comes because of you including mealso .your voice is incridble and melodious.your singing stly is too much unique uncompited and marvaless.thats why your show is going rock and super hit .All oudience enjoyed alot.

secondly i want to tell you about my musical activities,i am vert interested in singing ,i learn it knowadays .i sing a song and i perfer to old music because its wording is so meaning ful and it has natural feelings.

i want to share some points with you thats help you alot .once you do prectice daily .secondly try to make your on music.good luck for your future.Thanks

REGARDS

IRAM

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B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. However, the structure and clarity could be improved for better impact.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, numerous grammatical errors and organizational issues affect the overall flow and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and accuracy of the letter. Improved grammar is essential for better communication.

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