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Band 5+: Write an introduction and an overview for each of the Writing Task 1 questions below.The graph below shows how much money a city council gave to book clubs over a four-year period.

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The image shows a dual-axis line graph with council donations to book clubs over four years. Donations: Year 1 - £20,000, Year 2 - £25,000, Year 3 - £35,000, Year 4 - £40,000. Book club members: Year 1 - 12,000, Year 2 - 10,000, Year 3 - 11,000, Year 4 - 14,000. Solid line represents the amount of money given; dotted line represents the number of book club members.

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The line graph gives information about the amount of money which a city counsil donated to book clubs over a given period. Overall, The amount of money showed upward trend through the period aside from year 4. After year 3 number of book club members showed same trend with amount of money, however in the year 1 and year 2, it decreased slightly.

In these given years, the counsil of the city donated more money compare to every basic years, meanwhile in the year 1 it was about 21,000 pounds and at the final of the period counsil gave about 32,000 pounds. Especially, in the year 3 it increased dramatically and reached a peak, about 40,000 pounds. However, in the year 4 it showed downward trend and fall down about 32,000 pounds.

The number of book club members was about 6000 at the start of the period and showed downward trend in first half. From year 3 it rose dramatically and at the final of the year achieved more than 10000 members and then it raised more slowly, through year 4 it reached 12000.

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about: 6

money: 4

period: 4

showed: 4

trend: 4

amount: 3

counsil: 3

members: 3

pounds: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by providing an introduction and an overview, and it attempts to describe the main trends. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., starting values, peak values, and trends) and some unclear phrasing. The overview is present but could be more precise. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that the overview clearly summarizes the main trends without minor errors. Also, avoid vague statements and check spelling (e.g., 'council').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction and an overview, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The overview is somewhat unclear and does not accurately summarize the main trends. Paragraphing is present but not always logical, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes incorrect. To improve, focus on creating a clear and accurate overview, and use a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some repetition and imprecise word choices (e.g., 'counsil' for 'council', 'basic years' instead of 'initial years'). There is an attempt to use a range of expressions, but some are used incorrectly (e.g., 'showed upward trend' should be 'showed an upward trend'). To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and use more precise and varied language. Also, ensure correct spelling and word forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, article usage, and tense consistency. There are also issues with sentence structure, such as run-on sentences and incomplete comparisons. Punctuation is often incorrect or missing. To improve, practice writing with a focus on grammatical accuracy, review basic grammar rules, and proofread your work carefully. Use a variety of sentence structures to demonstrate flexibility.

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