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Band 5+: You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Sir,

I am Mrs Danielle. I am writing this letter to explain you that I can not be able to honor the appointment I gave you during my interview.

In fact, I supposed starting the work in your company as computer scientist in 5 days. But I can not because recently I had the issues that impose me to push my trip.

Actually, I booked to leave my country to there for 10 days. But the company sent me the email yesterday and informed me that the airplane has some technical problems. They are not be able to solve this matter before one week. I checked to find another company which plan to arrive there as soon as possible but I did not find.

I think I will be able to start my work in 8 days when the company will solve their worry.

Thank you for your attention for this important matter.

Kind Regards,

Marcelle Fouad

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the situation, describing the problem, and providing a new start date. However, it could be more concise and direct.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are a bit awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. There are some instances of word choice that could be improved for greater precision and naturalness.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter, which detract from the overall clarity and fluency. The letter would benefit from careful proofreading and editing.

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