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Band 6+: You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Manager,

I am writing to inform you regarding my first day at job next week will be postponed due to few problems that are suddenly happened to me.

Firstly, I would like to express my apology to you, as you have already known that currently I am still working for another company. At the moment, my company have not found any replacement of the vacant position yet. On the other hand, my responsibilities at my workplace are not finished yet because there are some viruses that suddenly attacked my computer, so that the IT team are currently still working on it.

If you do not mind, would you like do me a favor? I promise that my tasks will finally finish on this coming Wednesday, and I will directly join your company the day after.

Once again, I feel regret to tell you about my situation, and hopefully, you allow me to join your company as I requested. Thank you for your kind attention, and I look forward to hearing your positive response

Best regards,

Frederick White

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing a clear explanation of the situation, problems, and proposed start date. However, the letter could be more concise and direct.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between paragraphs and sentences. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some phrases could be more precise and natural. The use of vocabulary is generally accurate and appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter contains a number of grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and verb tenses. While the range of grammatical structures is adequate, accuracy needs improvement.

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