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Band 6+: You are interested in volunteering at a local animal shelter. Write a letter to the volunteer coordinator expressing your interest. You should include details about: - your relevant skills or experience - your availability - why you want to volunteer there.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Leonardo Gomes, veterinary assistant at Pets Clinic, Abu-Dahbi. I come to know that there is a vacant position for volunteer at your Carnivor Animal Shelter.

I have 4 years of work experience as a veterinary assistant. My affection, devotion and love for animal made me able to handle animal carefully. I strongly feel miserable for basic need of animal. I deeply admire your organisation for it’s commitment to animal welfare and the passion to fulfill their basic rights.

I am a responsible person and have the potential to efficiently handle and feed animals. I have overcome challenges like managing aggressive animal. I have strong desire to contribute to their care and well being. I am eager to to offer my time and skills to support your shelter.

I am available to volunteer I weekday from 7:00 am to 9:00 am. I would appreciate the opportunity and will look forward to your prompt response.

Yours Sincerely,

Leonardo Gomes

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animal: 6

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing relevant details about skills, availability, and reasons for volunteering. The content is well-organized and clearly presented. To further enhance the response, consider adding specific examples to illustrate your skills and experience, and proofread carefully to eliminate minor grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally organized, but some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve the flow. Consider using transition words or phrases to connect ideas between paragraphs and within them. For example, you could add a sentence at the end of the second paragraph that clearly leads into your skills and experience in the third paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are opportunities to use more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using general terms like 'handle animal,' try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to animal care. Also, be careful with word choice to ensure the tone is professional and appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that occasionally impede understanding. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct verb tense usage. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and the proper use of articles (a, an, the). Proofreading carefully before submitting will help catch these errors.

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