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Band 4+: You are planning a housewarming party to celebrate moving into your new home and want to invite your neighbors. Write a letter to your neighbors inviting them to the party. You should include details about: - The reason for the celebration and what your new house is like - When and where the party will be held and what activities are planned - How they can RSVP and if there is anything they should bring.

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Hii dear,

I hope this message find you well. Today i am very excited and writing this email to invite my all dear friends and neighbours on the occasion of complete my home loan EMI and now i achieve the ownership of my dream home.As all of You know from last 12 years i stay with my family in the rented room. My wife having a dream that’s we should have our own home in mumbai to make my wife dream in reality i work hard in corporate, i stay more time in office to collect money for my home EMI. it almost take 9 years to pay EMI in this years i sacrifice my all dreams and only focus on my office work to arrange money to pay my EMI on time and in between so many times i get depressed about my loan but due to god mercy and miracle and my hard work i achieved my dreams.now i am very happy and want to share my happiness with my dear friends because some credits also goes to my neighbours and friends because in my difficult time they motivate and guide me that I can’t forget in my life. So my friends i invite all of you to come in my home party on 29 December 2025 at sharp 6 Pm. tha address of my new home is room no 403 abubakar apt near azad maidan mumbra thane.

Thank you

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

friends: 4

dream: 3

years: 3

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant information about the home loan EMI. Key points are somewhat repetitive and occasionally inappropriate for a housewarming invitation to neighbors. To improve, focus on the core elements of a housewarming invitation: express excitement about the new home, clearly state the party's purpose, provide all necessary details (date, time, location, parking), and include a polite RSVP request. Remove the extensive details about your financial struggles and focus on creating a welcoming and celebratory tone.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the intended message. Paragraphing is absent, and the flow of ideas is disjointed. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences, logical transitions, and well-defined paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the invitation, such as the reason for the party, the details of the event, and any special requests.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, lacking the range and precision needed for a higher score. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and awkward phrasing. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider variety of vocabulary related to celebrations, homeownership, and invitations. Focus on using more precise and natural expressions to convey your message effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your writing.

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