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Band 4+: You are planning a surprise birthday party for a close friend. Write an email to another mutual friend to ask for help with the arrangements. In your email, you should: - explain why you are organizing the party - suggest a date, time, and venue for the party - ask for their assistance with specific tasks

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Hello Maaz,

I hope Your are doing well.

I am writing this letter to request your help to arrange a birthday part of our beloved friend Ali Jone. He will be turning 23 years old on next tuesday. I am thinking about to throw a birthday part for him and asking you to handle all the docation stuff.

The tasks which i want you to handle ares:

Docation which should be the car related theme

A car cake and a good camera for pictures

In Hamza birthday party you did handled the docration, cake and camera stuff perfectly that’s why i have chosen u for this task. lastly, would like you to inform you that we will meet tomorrow at the City Garden around 12:00 PM to discuss all these things.

Word Count: 131

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
birthday: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task requirements by requesting help with the party arrangements, specifying the tasks, explaining the reason for choosing the recipient, and providing details about a meeting. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses in detail and clarity. To improve, ensure all points are fully developed with specific details and that the language is consistently clear and accurate. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas is disrupted by grammatical errors. Paragraphing is present but not effectively used to separate distinct ideas. To improve coherence, focus on creating a clearer structure with well-defined paragraphs, each addressing a specific aspect of the request. Using transitional phrases can also help to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive. There's a lack of varied and precise language, which limits the letter's impact. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to party planning and delegation. Using synonyms and more descriptive words can make the writing more engaging and effective.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. These errors significantly impede understanding. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully for errors. Practicing sentence construction and varying sentence structures can also enhance grammatical range.

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