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Band 7+: You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organization. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you are going to do work experience. In your letter thank the manager for the opportunity to do work experience. explain what you hope to learn from the work experience. ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do.

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Dear Manager,

I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the work opportunity that you have provided to me. I am very excited to start working in this position and I would like to know more about the location where I am going to work.

During my three months tenure at your firm (Pizza Hut), I am looking forward to enhance my knowledge by being deeply involved in daily operations. I am mainly interested in learning how your store approaches the everyday tasks such as making the dough, serving and delivering the pizzas, as well as managing staff and handling customers. I hope to gain experience in these areas so that I can start my own restaurant in the future.

I would like to know your advice on completing a food handler certificate course. Whether this would be helpful for me or not? Once again I am really thankful for this opportunity.

I look forward to your prompt reply.

Your sincerely,

Ketul Shah

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, expressing gratitude, explaining learning objectives, and asking relevant questions. The tone is consistently polite and professional. To improve, consider adding more specific questions about the work experience to demonstrate a deeper engagement and preparation for the role.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, and the information is presented in a logical order. However, consider using more varied cohesive devices to further enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs. For example, you could use transition words or phrases to connect ideas more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate. The letter effectively conveys the writer's gratitude and intentions. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more specific or nuanced vocabulary related to the restaurant industry or work experience. For example, instead of 'daily operations,' you could use more specific terms like 'inventory management' or 'customer service protocols.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. The sentence structures are varied and generally accurate. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles to further improve grammatical accuracy. For example, in the second paragraph, ensure that verb tenses are consistent and appropriate for the context.

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