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Band 5+: You have been staying in a foreign country for the last two years, and your visa is about to expire next June. However, you are planning to take a three-months professional cource. You will need a visa extension. Write a letter to the consular in the embassy and ask for an extension on your visa.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter for the extension of my stay as my work permit is set to expire in June. However, I want to persue a short-term course.

As I am an international student in Canada. I came in Surrey on student visa about two years ago from India. My master’s degree in Hospitality management will be completed in June. As soon as, I am going to be graduated, my work permit will expire in same month.

After completion of my post-graduation, I would like to continue short-term study for three months in culinary skills. As, I do not have any experience in this field. This course will help me to get some practical knowledge as well because it is very hard to get the job. It is my humble request to you, please give me an extension for another three months.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Kaur

Word Count: 155

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task appropriately by requesting a visa extension. However, some information could be clearer, such as the specific visa type and the course details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some inconsistencies and abrupt transitions that affect the overall flow. Paragraphing could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there are some instances of informal language and repetition. More sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter uses some complex structures, there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity and overall impression. Addressing these errors would significantly improve the score.

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