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Band 5+: You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs Begin as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in joining a sports club which is near my residence. I get to know that you are the manager of that sports club though its web-sight.

Actually, the thing is I just enrolled in a course in Sheridan college about mechanical engineering design and drafting. I have a keen interest in sports especially cricket, but, unfortunately, they don’t have a dedicated sports facility in their campus. So, through my classmate who is a local student, I get to know that Steels sports center is closest to my house in which I can play some sports.

It will be very helpful if you can answer some of my questions regarding my enrollment in the club. I would like to know about facilities provided by the club with their costs. I would also like to know about some of the current members of the club.

Please answer my questions as soon as you can so that I can start my membership as early as possible. You can also contact me though my phone number which is 1231231231.

Thank you. Regards,

Jay.

Word Count: 190

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 5

which: 3

about: 3

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Task Response

6

The letter adequately addresses the task by introducing the writer, expressing interest in joining the sports club, and asking relevant questions about the club. However, there are some lapses in content, such as not directly addressing the manager as the recipient of the letter and not providing a clear reason for being interested in the specific sports club.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of ideas. Additionally, there are some language issues that affect the overall coherence, such as the use of 'web-sight' instead of 'website'.

Lexical Resource

5

The letter demonstrates some flexibility and control in the use of vocabulary, but there are also instances of imprecise language and inaccuracies. There is a need for a wider range of vocabulary and more sophisticated control of lexical features.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5

While a variety of structures are attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors and punctuation issues throughout the letter. It would benefit from more accurate and appropriate use of grammar and punctuation.

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