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Band 7+: You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year." Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …….,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing regarding an advertisement you published through social media to express my interest in teaching your children my language.

What makes me suitable for this job is my work experience as a teacher in Iran. To be more precise, I had been literature teacher for 6 years. In addition, I completed courses related to communication with children, which makes it easy to connect with them.

Furthermore, I can contribute to your children solving their problems in their lessons, particularly math, since I am studying math nowadays at the university.

What captivates me the most about the job is a combination of reasons, including a unique opportunity to working with children, which I truly eager about it and a remarkable chance, informing me of your culture and traditions.

Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing a positive response from you. If you need any further information, please feel free to reach out me via email or phone.

Yours faithfully,

Mohammadreza Hadavi

Word Count: 170

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Overall Band Score

7
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
children: 4
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Task Response

8
The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant and sufficient information regarding the applicant's suitability, additional skills, and reasons for wanting the job. The content is well-organized and presented clearly. To further enhance the response, consider adding specific examples to illustrate your teaching experience and communication skills with children. Also, proofread for minor grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the letter addresses all points mentioned in the task. However, there are a few areas where the flow could be improved. For instance, the transition between the second and third paragraphs could be smoother. Consider using transitional phrases to better connect your ideas.

Lexical Resource

7
The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, and the language used is generally appropriate for the task. However, there are opportunities to use more precise or sophisticated vocabulary to enhance the impact of your writing. For example, instead of 'connect with them,' you could use 'establish rapport with them.' Also, 'truly eager about it' could be rephrased for better impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used. However, there are a few grammatical errors that need attention. For example, 'working with children, which I truly eager about it and a remarkable chance, informing me of your culture and traditions' contains errors in sentence structure and verb usage. Ensure that your sentences are grammatically correct and that verb tenses are consistent. Proofreading carefully before submitting your letter can help catch these errors.

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