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Band 4+: You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter, say which part-time course you booked explain why you need to cancel your booking ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to cancel my recently booked part-time course at your school.

My name is Nadeem Nirban, and I am honourable student in your class. It is the coding with Java that starts on the 20th April, 2024.It is the weekend course which is last more then 12 weeks, and the program is taken by Prof. Sahil Khatik.

I need to cancel this course due to I am would like to take another pathway which is Let us Python. My friend Amit Singh suggest me that before staring your coding journey First and foremost you have to start with Python due it is the easy to understand, and the scripting is short as compare to Java.

However can I take Let us python course instead of getting the refund? I intend to apply for an MNC companies such as Microsoft, Google and Amazon which are run on this coding tool also can you recommended different course which is suitable in this type of MNC companies and easily to gain the knowledge.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 5

which: 4

coding: 3

python: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by stating the intention to cancel the booked part-time course, explaining the reason for cancellation, and inquiring about booking a different course. However, there are some minor deviations from the task requirements, such as providing unnecessary details about the current course and the friend's suggestion. Try to focus more on the cancellation and the request for a different course.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically presented. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of information. Consider organizing the content into more structured paragraphs to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter. However, some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings are present. Work on improving the precision and accuracy of your word choices to elevate the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are instances of grammatical errors, especially in verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Pay attention to these details to enhance grammatical accuracy.

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